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JUST A HEART </3

Ice lies
in the depths of his eyes
Cold and hard
just like his heart
He says that he cares
but only daggers he stares
his twisted thoughts
of what he wishes he forgot

Her eyes are set aflame
when she hears his name
her eyes swell with tears
as she remembers her fears
thoughts swirl in her demented mind
she tries to leave her feelings behind

The sweetness still lies on their lips
where each other they have kissed
The bruises are still there
from the love they used to share
they should have known it from the start
oh but don't worry... it's just a heart

by rosesANDletters
posted on 10/14/2008

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Comment by untraceable: Oct 14, 2008 1:45 pm
Too many rhymes, and a little cliche. too many she's he's and her's.
Comment by AngelicallyBroken: Oct 14, 2008 3:15 pm
this is really good,lots of good imagery!

untraceableSticking tongue outlease keep the negative comments to yourself,this site isn't for worldwide known authors,the poems are good but not perfect...understand that.im sure yours aren't amazing alllll the time either.thanks.

amazing job rosesANDletters! =)
Comment by rosesANDletters: Oct 19, 2008 6:26 pm
lol thanks both of you Smiley i'm looking for compliments and critizism so... thanks i understand i can't please everyone Smiley
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