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Just a Dream

I woke up early this morning
in this bed that is so cold
Half asleep I reached for you
There was nothing there to hold

Last night I had the best dream
You had never told me goodbye
That you were not coming back
Was someone telling a cruel lie

Smell of perfume on your pillow
I struggle to hold back the tear
The chill sweeps through my body
as reality whispers in my ear

My love for you is not fading
Still not sure what went wrong
Lying here frozen in my bed
I refuse to believe that you're gone

I give your hug to your pillow
Wish that all is not what it seems
I would close my eyes forever
If we were together in my dreams

by Brandon
posted on 01/18/2009

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Comment by lostangel: Jan 18, 2009 8:51 pm
I love it...it is an amazing poem that describes lost love so well. keep up the good work
Comment by clinxi: Jan 18, 2009 8:24 pm
I LOVE THIS POEM its so sweet and beautiful Sticking tongue out if a had that send to me id be running bak to who eva sent it xx great job keep righting
Comment by mylifeasacutter: Jan 18, 2009 7:44 pm
o my god your amazing and i loved it and wow....your just so amazing i loved it i vote up!
Comment by Tinkerbellpixie: Jan 18, 2009 7:06 pm
This is a really touching poem.
We all wish to live in our fantasies
sometimes. Nice work!
Comment by gothinlove: Jan 18, 2009 6:41 pm
you touched me with this one. I love it
Comment by gabriella: Jan 18, 2009 4:57 pm
You always make me cry
beautiful and sad poem
Comment by fallingagain: Jan 18, 2009 5:04 pm
I really love your poems
wow this is so sad
Comment by jenskie78: Jan 18, 2009 5:29 pm
nice one. from the abundance of the heart, your thoughts spell it out. keep writing
Comment by inthecold: Jan 19, 2009 6:07 am
Excellent work
that was very touching
keep writing
Comment by brokenheartedarmysister: Jan 19, 2009 7:17 am
This is such a pretty poem
Comment by blackheart: Jan 19, 2009 7:24 am
Wow, what a great poem
It is hard to let go
perfectly written
Comment by EmperorMosta: Jan 19, 2009 1:02 pm
You shock me once again with another amazing poem, great job!
Comment by Josef: Jan 20, 2009 4:03 am
I would close my eyes forever
If we were together in my dreams

I like this line! Nice job!
Comment by forgottenchild: Jan 20, 2009 8:50 am
great job, brandon.

*smiles*
Comment by cutiepie: Jan 20, 2009 3:41 pm
shit... this is so kewl
i know what you mean...
wow....love it love it...
it's as though you've been through alot...
Comment by heartlesslover: Jan 27, 2009 9:03 am
excellent piece
I do love this one
Comment by messengerbird: Feb 4, 2009 12:13 pm
I go through that every single night.
You should read my poem, SUNRISE, it's about the same thing. I'd like to know what you think.
I really love this poem. Good job.
Comment by TiffantAnnLoganAdams: Feb 5, 2009 2:34 pm
love it
Comment by 0oAngelo0: Feb 7, 2009 9:13 pm
Another gawjus poem.
. . . . i love how you put your words together.
xx love and light 0oAngelo0
Comment by blackdash: Feb 21, 2009 12:17 am
Great! I loved the last two lines; made a tingle go up a spine Smiley.
Comment by christi823: Feb 23, 2009 8:51 am
I had to fight back tears when I read this.

I love this.(:
Comment by darkworldangel: Mar 5, 2009 11:01 am
that was great. i have had many of those times myself. keep writing
Comment by true: Mar 22, 2009 2:03 am
dreams dreams dreams!!! if only dreams come true.....!!!


well done brandon.....!!!
Comment by khaleel: Apr 14, 2009 9:02 pm
IAM speechless.......
Comment by SilentBeauty: Apr 15, 2009 1:56 pm
this is beautiful i love your poems
Comment by KCFangel: Apr 27, 2009 9:53 pm
aww this one is cute!!
Comment by LittleDareDevil: May 2, 2009 2:25 pm
AWW! That is cute, but sad. I love it.
Comment by lawbound22: May 3, 2009 11:25 pm
once again. great job. i read three now i gotta read more.
Comment by HeartlessAngel: May 5, 2009 2:43 pm
Amazing poem! I love it.
Comment by MrsPerez: May 6, 2009 8:28 am
This is just a great poem, and lost love is the worst way to be heart broken, I cried so much these past few days, because everything seems to make me cry out in pain. This poem, is just amazing!
Comment by THEprincess: May 19, 2009 11:23 am
This is awesome i love it its so cute i am speeechless wow
Comment by alysiarulz: May 21, 2009 2:39 pm
awww this was so nice...
Comment by christinababe903: Jun 7, 2009 11:20 am
nice poem
Comment by NixNi: Jul 24, 2009 11:12 pm
beautiful
Comment by brimorales14: Aug 19, 2009 9:02 pm
Owow. I really love your way with words. It's amazing to me that you have so much talent. I read all your poetrty...and I definitely think you should be published, dude. Seriously.
Comment by deejay: Sep 12, 2009 3:24 am
Only read two of your poems and I am already a fan!

You seem to be able to put into words just perfectly the sorrow that grips at you.

Nice.
Comment by nina777: Nov 3, 2009 1:32 pm
nice poem i like it
Comment by TiffantAnnLoganAdams: Nov 16, 2009 10:21 am
loved it
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