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January 26

"Baby"
"With this, are you happy?"
-"No, are you honey?"
"No, it's no longer pretty"

"Baby"
"Do you want to continue with me?"
-"I'm not sure. I leave it to you to decide honey"
"It's better if the answer is no baby"

6 seasons passed,
I was never alone,
Friends said it will last,
But no, now it is gone.

I love her,
But maybe it wasn't enough,
Wasn't enough for me to be a great lover,
Wasn't enough for us to go through a situation that was tough.

I still love her,
I really miss her alot,
But I believe to be apart is better,
As she deserves a guy like me, not.

I know she's hurt,
But she doesn't know I'm crushed,
As to let the rose I picked rot,
As I still truly love her.

I hope the day will come,
When she realised I did this for her own good,
Even though it kills me,
But I believe "When one loves a person so much, It's better to let her go if its for her best benefit".

Honey, I still love you,
But I know, I must not have you,
Even if you still want to be with me,
"Please honey, I'm guilty, you deserve a better prince than me......"

Based on true feelings and emotions.

by scorpio
posted on 12/31/1969

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Comment by InMyDreams: Jan 28, 2007 11:57 am
aww.. amazing poem <3.. love the ending a lot.. great emotion in this one!! <3
Comment by alex: Jan 28, 2007 4:04 pm
OMG this is SO sad....i started tearing up!!! im so sorry that it had to be that way!!! and hopefully she sees that it was for her own good!!! WOW i absolutly LOVE this poem!!! its simply AMAZING!!!
Comment by ragingquiet13: Jan 28, 2007 7:18 pm
omfg best poem ive read about this and i have never met sum1 strong enough to let ther true love go so heres to a black hole of a heart (that being a good thing though )love it love it love it !!!!!!~tasha
Comment by shyhallow: Jan 28, 2007 7:22 pm
If you love her, you should tell her the reason why you let her go.

Comment by cami: Jan 28, 2007 7:32 pm
i love the ending..
but i think you tell her and talk to her b/c maybe to her you are the best.
Comment by SaintJ: Jan 29, 2007 4:25 am
Everyone feels a lil inferior to the one they have... believe me, so did i.... well... i love your poem..... great stuff man.... and well.... im srry it had to be tht way bro... take care... and hopefully... she'll come back to you, knowin tht you ARE the best for her..... take care bro....
Comment by WhyIsSheWithHim: Feb 6, 2007 1:51 pm
i luv the ending... this is a wonderful poem, and you seem like a great guy, she will come back to you, just give her a little time
Comment by Reece: Feb 7, 2007 1:00 am
This is really good, keep writing
Comment by LoveLiesBleeding: Feb 7, 2007 6:45 am
I've missed reading your stuff...you really do have a talent, i know that may sound cliched or whatever but i think you're a great writer and i love this poem!
Comment by Sinnocence: Feb 13, 2007 1:57 am
hey man u the winter wind...read frost. u knoe the drill
Comment by jaylynn: Feb 14, 2007 6:29 pm
"When one loves a person so much, It's better to let her go if its for her best benefit".

thats soo sweet. god wish i knew more poeple that went by that...

cutest poem ever. love it.
Comment by scorpio: Feb 17, 2007 8:48 am
thanx so much guys for the complements and the sugestions. well i already talked to her, but then she wants me to stay away from her now as she choose to forget about me. :'(
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