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I Write To Push Away The Tears.

I write to push away the tears;
Or rather cry them onto the paper.
I sing to remind me;
Of what the song truly means.
I dance to numb the pain;
And to help void my reaction.
I cry to remind myself I care;
And because the pain is too much to keep inside.
I walk to be with nature;
And to imagine im not alone.
I slice to release the pain;
It builds up to where I cannot take it.
I listen to sad songs;
Because I do not feel I want to be cheery.
I write to push away the tears;
I repeat to deepen the meaning.

by mybeloved
posted on 11/05/2009

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Comment by anonymouswriter: Nov 6, 2009 11:39 pm
Smiley) I feel the same way!
Comment by wishingitwasyou: Nov 19, 2009 3:48 pm
i like Smiley
Comment by JardyBardy: Nov 15, 2009 12:25 am
truely amazing, i really loved your poem!
Comment by ForgottenAngel36: Nov 8, 2009 1:56 am
I really liked your poem.
Comment by JamesR: Nov 6, 2009 7:15 pm
Nice stuff Smiley I think it would be rather cool to continue you on and change the meaning, you could do something like;
I write to embrace life;
Crying is only wasting it
I sing to remind me and others;
Of what beauty lies within.
I dance to express my joys;
Words are nothing without action

Etc.etc.
Would make for a fantastic poem with your style of writing!
Comment by BlackbookPast: Nov 5, 2009 9:37 pm
dude this is really good..
Comment by mybeloved: Nov 5, 2009 9:42 pm
thanksSmiley that means alot
Comment by PerpetualNature: Nov 5, 2009 10:13 pm
Truly great!
Comment by meltedsnowman: Nov 5, 2009 11:16 pm
such words. such emotion. you truly are amazing
Comment by Loveformusicandpoetry1790: Nov 6, 2009 9:46 am
Wow! this is an awesome poem, it truly and genuinely means soo much.. very nice keep it up*smiles**
Comment by mybeloved: Nov 6, 2009 9:54 am
thank you! =)
Comment by xDestructive: Nov 6, 2009 12:14 pm
wow this is really great, writing is a form of release, thats why people love it so much.. tis is awesome! keep it up!
Comment by stratosgreek: Nov 6, 2009 12:57 pm
very nice. keep ur head up and dont be sad. life goes on.
trust me i now. love comes 1 time in life you will now when it hits!
keep writing great job!
Comment by prettyspl: Nov 6, 2009 1:56 pm
I really enjoyed how you intertwined the sentences, their meanings .. the relation of what you were feeling to what you were doing. Interesting and a great read. Very good!
Comment by mscottonkandy: Nov 6, 2009 2:53 pm
I could not have said it better myself.
Comment by OMAYRA14: Nov 8, 2009 3:43 pm
Nice poem sometimes I feel the same way
Comment by vishnuld: Nov 8, 2009 8:28 pm
i feel the same way as u do ...thank u so much for potraying our feelings....hats off to u
Comment by nubishpoethere: Nov 8, 2009 9:35 pm
These words you have spoken reaches the heart of all willing to listen =D
Comment by nubishpoethere: Nov 8, 2009 9:36 pm
These words you have spoken reaches the heart of all willing to listen =D
Comment by taraprue: Nov 9, 2009 5:28 am
these words really have true meaning and heart well done
Comment by BrandyReckaway: Nov 10, 2009 7:28 am
omg. i so love this poem. it has a great rythym and i can totally relate. i absolutely loved it. one of my favorties.
Comment by 4gottenchild: Nov 18, 2009 3:45 pm
amazing poem!!! soo true!
Comment by fruitloop199: Nov 12, 2009 8:58 am
beautiful
Comment by Atavist: Nov 16, 2009 7:29 pm
Great depth and the line that interposes itself within the emotional hurt in regards to the choice of physical release is chilling and realistic in its use.
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