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I wanna feel like my salad days!!!!

We seem to have metaphor everywhere!
Life is a metaphor,death also
How could art be spun from a reality?
already so charged with elemental symbolism..
Vision of hell we humans
have laboured so mightly
to constuct on the earth

When was the last time
I saw the sunset and it felt like
Gods perfect painting
colors collected from the sun and the rainbow
the sky ..being his soft sheet?!

When was the last time i saw a tree and i felt
it was saying...
"i am a model..
natures masterpiece displayed
see me strike a pose..."

when was the last time i saw a waterfall and it said
to me "i am a watery white snake,fallin down to meet
my mates.."

Take me back dear lord!
to the days where
i saw only white and innocence in things!
To the days when i had fun while learning!
TAKE ME BACK!!!

by Novembre
posted on 07/24/2007

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Comment by friendZdogZ: Jul 24, 2007 10:19 am
nice poem
wait you actually had fun learning! wat were you 2 o something? lol jk
Comment by Lonesum: Jul 24, 2007 10:35 am
I like it. it just made me think of being a kid and never seeing evil in the world. And then how much life has changed as I got older and learned about corruption and hate, angst and pain. Yeah he can take me back too. Good poem.
Comment by cjfin00: Jul 24, 2007 10:43 am
I like it too! I agree with Lonesum. Well done!
Comment by Abz: Jul 24, 2007 10:48 am
thts really gd! yeh i know exactly wot u mean, when u were small it woz just all fun n games n u thought nothing would ever be different n the worst thing u could do is fall over n cut ur knee but now everything seems evil and you just wish you could go back and ave fun again.
Comment by TheEmoFreak: Jul 24, 2007 12:20 pm
good poem. interesting. thnx for the comments on mine Smiley
Comment by UrDReaMsArEmYNiGhtMaREs: Sep 25, 2007 8:56 am
wow i know how you feel things get so complicated and idk what happened to innocents n e more i want to just have fun and not worry the season autum just reminds me of the fun days they take me back to playing hida na d go seek in the yard with my friends also when i wasn't to old or to cool to go trick or treating god that makes me wonder where *my* innocents has gone
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