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I won't be your Shadow

It's been so hard to lock your door,
I don't think I can do this anymore.
I miss the mornings and good nights,
the endless laughs and long lasting fights.
It's so hard to be your friend
because our memories never end.
I wish I wasn't so far away,
because then we could always stay.
I know you said you would wait,
but how much of this can you take?
I can't take away your could be,
Even if what I do hurts me.
I love you so I should do whats best,
And put our relationship back to rest.
That's why I will let you go,
So I won't dim the light that you show.

by christinaxxnguyen
posted on 04/25/2009

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Comment by flippinthrulife17: Apr 25, 2009 4:54 pm
chrisinaxxnguyen, this is good. i can definitely relate. ugh exhausting isnt it. lol
Comment by volleyballLOVER: May 6, 2009 2:19 pm
i can totally relate!! love this poem, great writing.
Comment by Shadow17: May 12, 2009 5:48 pm
Dark poem, indeed. I like how your poems do have a nice structure and a good sense imagery. However, I do think that in order to improve your writing, I think you should try to experiment more. Throw away rhyme or at least in parts. Change the structure. Have an underlying recurring thought. Etc. Etc. Just try and see, maybe you'll find that your poems will go to new lengths and quality. In any case, I like your poems and well, just see what you do as you progress. You have potential!
Comment by jmegs13: May 15, 2009 9:29 am
I know exactly how this feels
Comment by icantbewithouther: May 29, 2009 9:19 am
oh wow hun this is sad i can tell u really like this person but u also dont let that block your judgement on what would be in this person's best interest
When u find your love it wont be someone who would make you subconsciously decide wether or not to give up your old self
Comment by FRANKDARK: Jan 21, 2010 12:41 am
OMG, i can relate so much, i love it, nice work
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