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I Can't Stop Crying Today
I can't stop crying today
My world walked out the door
With her she took my heart
For I will love no more
The hours passed like seconds
When our two hearts were one
The seconds passed like hours
After she said that she was done
She was going to love me forever
At least that is what she said
Her heart belonged to someone else
That is what her letter read
I no longer live in color
My world is black and white
I always wonder what she is doing
As I lie awake at night
I hope tomorrow is better
This is what I pray
But right now my heart is broken
I can't stop crying today
by Brandon
posted on 09/06/2008
My world walked out the door
With her she took my heart
For I will love no more
The hours passed like seconds
When our two hearts were one
The seconds passed like hours
After she said that she was done
She was going to love me forever
At least that is what she said
Her heart belonged to someone else
That is what her letter read
I no longer live in color
My world is black and white
I always wonder what she is doing
As I lie awake at night
I hope tomorrow is better
This is what I pray
But right now my heart is broken
I can't stop crying today
by Brandon
posted on 09/06/2008
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Comments: 265
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Comment by cadjessicamooky2011: Sep 26, 2008 7:31 pm
thats really so sad i feel the same me and my boyfriend just broke upComment by cutiepie: Oct 3, 2008 12:47 pm
awww, that's amazing i absolutly, ur my idolComment by gothchik13: Oct 5, 2008 7:49 am
i like this poem...A LOT!!!!!!Comment by xxBlackRainbowxx: Sep 7, 2008 11:48 am
aw...im sorry..
and i love this poem!
Comment by Selene: Sep 7, 2008 5:07 am
really well written poem. love it.Comment by friendZdogZ: Oct 23, 2008 12:11 pm
aww that's so sad but sweet. again awesome poem.Comment by breathtakingly1evil13: Oct 18, 2008 8:09 pm
this is like uber sad but rlly great.....im actually crying ;_;Comment by linger: Sep 27, 2008 10:01 am
That was a beautiful poem....I hope things get better! =)Comment by SAMSTACY: Mar 17, 2009 4:02 pm
MADD KUDOS AWESOME POEM I FEEL YOUR PAINComment by Raeyne: Sep 7, 2008 8:24 pm
Love itComment by FallenAngel369: May 1, 2009 7:47 pm
wow this is really sad im sorryComment by SmilingTragedy: Oct 18, 2008 6:49 pm
same here. great job.Comment by SmilingTragedy: Oct 18, 2008 6:49 pm
same here. great job.Comment by babyboogt82886: Sep 8, 2008 5:22 am
Wow I really like this poem! Very well written and you can feel the emotion in it! Thanks for sharing! And hang in there! 
Comment by scarredemotions17: Sep 8, 2008 7:14 am
that was an excellent poem and it touched me dearlyComment by mzbrowneyez: Sep 8, 2008 10:18 am
aww..i really feel bad for you..ive been there..it gets better with timeComment by darksideofme: Sep 8, 2008 12:16 pm
"The hours passed like seconds
When our two hearts were one
The seconds passed like hours
After she said that she was done"
I like that a lot
Comment by watever76: Sep 8, 2008 2:47 pm
wow i can relate to this peom so much Comment by Tin22: Sep 8, 2008 4:58 pm
hmmmm...I'm speechless...felt how bad you felt too...Being silent is swimming on the hurting feeling...I hate it it's silent like yours...But I loved this!Comment by NOangelsLEFT: Sep 8, 2008 5:48 pm
that's a really great poem .. Very well written
hope you'll be ok
Comment by John1993: Sep 8, 2008 11:52 pm
great poemComment by meletha122694: Sep 9, 2008 4:21 am
what a great poem, I'm sending this to my son who has gone through the same situation with a woman, keep up the fantastic workComment by Laurabethgirl: Sep 9, 2008 11:22 am
It's really good! It's so sad, but I love it.Comment by xxdarksinxx: Sep 9, 2008 3:11 pm
awwww... omg thats adorable im crying just reading bout it cuz it brot bak memories!!! tears!!! Comment by darknessfalls: Sep 9, 2008 6:59 pm
aww em so sorry but great poem i love it so much so real.. :/Comment by wyldegirl: Sep 9, 2008 11:20 pm
OMG...I feel this one most of all! That pain of being alone after having someone with you for along time sucks! Comment by 0oAngelo0: Sep 10, 2008 12:28 am
I really love this poem
I really feel it ya know.
You have a beautiful talent
Love and light
Angel
Comment by gothchik13: Sep 10, 2008 6:23 am
very good, i love it! you have very good talents at writing poetry! Comment by ashuhhland: Sep 10, 2008 2:23 pm
im sorry hunComment by childOFtheNIGHT: Sep 11, 2008 3:55 am
OMG...
that was just really really good! i love how it's simple n straight to the point...you really can feel the pain coming out of this when you read it...and then you get to the end ( I love how it ends ) and you hope that tomorow is better...it's so cute! but sad at the same time...alot of people can relate to this also , which makes it even better...what more can I say lol that was a bloody good poem!!
Comment by afterthestorm: Sep 11, 2008 10:02 pm
I really love this poem. It touches me deeply. It brings tears to my eyesComment by Chloe: Sep 12, 2008 7:08 am
This is the best . I am in tears. thank you so much for this beautiful poem.Comment by silentscream: Sep 12, 2008 9:27 am
I have old notebooks full of similar poems. Time passes and you will survive to be stronger, though maybe a little jaded... We learn through painComment by Breannalove: Sep 12, 2008 2:33 pm
I love this poem. It is so true. Love it.Comment by hrvyfrd: Sep 12, 2008 2:43 pm
Just a thought... poems don't have to rhyme. I like a lot of what you did here, but I think the rhyme scheme sort of crippled the emotion which would otherwise have been quite powerful. Try free verse. More effective.Comment by gabriella: Sep 12, 2008 4:18 pm
I loved it so muchComment by asdfyz: Sep 13, 2008 5:57 am
good, but a bi too generic for my tastes. the word choice and the writing was beautiful,but the way you chose to lay out the stanzas andyou abcb rhying style just was to generic for me.
I like the poem and the emotion is definitely there though.
Just saying try experimenting with different rhyming styles.
Comment by Flexie: Sep 13, 2008 7:26 am
=) we will all feel that pain at some point - great stuffComment by jazmine16: Sep 13, 2008 1:52 pm
wow that is just amazing!Comment by brokenXbruisedXbleeding: Sep 14, 2008 12:30 am
like flexie said we all feel that pain at some point in our life its better to love and lost than never loved at all.. sorry bout it tho.. also good poem oh an writing isnt about the perfect rhyming styles its about emotion life and what you are feel unlike asdfyz said Comment by findmeinvisible: Sep 14, 2008 8:19 am
i love this poem. i really do. Comment by AngelicallyBroken: Sep 14, 2008 10:55 am
im really sorry you had to go through this,this is very similar to what happened to me.so if you need to talk with someone who understands...im here for you.=) loved this one,great job!Comment by childOFtheNIGHT: Sep 14, 2008 10:22 pm
im bak to say I LOVE THIS POEM!!!!Comment by daydreamer11295: Sep 15, 2008 5:27 am
awww. i'm about to cry thats so sad. It reminds me of yesterday when the love of my life asked me out then yesterday told me that he fell for another girl before i even answered. I couldn't stop crying!!Comment by Holychild: Sep 15, 2008 11:37 am
Nice poem! your really good.
God bless you with Love&Peace
Comment by Atwood: Sep 15, 2008 5:48 pm
kasdksbdsComment by EdensApple91: Sep 15, 2008 7:54 pm
im sorry, but youll feel better one day
it wont be the same, but at least you have that memory
this is a very good piece
Comment by mrteenager: Sep 16, 2008 6:04 am
wow, this is an amazing piece of writing.
good job.
it'l be fune though.
Comment by mrteenager: Sep 16, 2008 6:04 am
wow, this is an amazing piece of writing.
good job.
it'l be fine though.
Comment by angeliclove: Sep 16, 2008 7:49 am
OMG.. that is so touching. I wish I could make all those tears go away. I am here for you.Comment by Sarahsmile: Sep 16, 2008 1:19 pm
This is my favorite poem everComment by lilphat15: Sep 17, 2008 12:22 pm
wow this poem is very touching keep the great work...Comment by darklove: Sep 18, 2008 1:34 pm
Great job, I love this poemComment by burningheart: Sep 19, 2008 2:24 pm
So sad... I can relate to this one. Very touchingComment by DaVa: Sep 20, 2008 9:56 pm
Damn, I feel you there. This happened to me just 3 months ago and I'm still not over her.Comment by KRiiSSY: Sep 21, 2008 9:58 am
THiiS iiS V3RY H34RTF3LT...
iiM SO SORRY FOR YOU
Comment by southerncomfort: Sep 22, 2008 7:19 pm
Incredible poem... very touchingComment by xACEx: Sep 23, 2008 8:07 am
Incredible poem, Keep up the good work!Comment by caworley: Sep 23, 2008 11:40 am
I really like thisComment by hollygirl: Sep 23, 2008 9:27 pm
Really really good.. It is so sad and touches me so muchComment by tearsofpain: Sep 25, 2008 3:55 pm
I feel the pain, this is so perfectComment by blackheart: Sep 25, 2008 4:05 pm
Such a wonderful poem that most can relateComment by Taruz: Sep 26, 2008 11:18 am
Love is painful, love is harsh but, creates a new poet every time it breaks a heart.Comment by Denise: Sep 26, 2008 3:22 pm
aww i love this one..i can totally ralate...Comment by killedfromlove: Sep 27, 2008 5:08 pm
I love this poem it reminds me so much of my ex who just up and walked out of his kids and my life because he found some one better........from this day on i still cry myself to sleep...Comment by Brokendreams: Sep 28, 2008 11:51 am
awwwwww, this really good, I'm sorry, i feel kinda the same way right now, but i hope u'll be okComment by arabianqu33n: Oct 20, 2008 9:44 pm
this is excellent...definitely felt that oneComment by MsMithra: Sep 29, 2008 3:10 am
I like the flow of this poem. I know how you feel and I'm sorry you have to feel like that.Comment by mytragedy: Sep 29, 2008 10:37 pm
So sad... I love this poem. Very good workComment by Shelo: Sep 30, 2008 3:14 am
Wow, i can't tell you how much i can relate to this. And i really hope things will get better for you.Comment by jessicamcc: Oct 1, 2008 8:29 am
this is basically amazing .
realllly good work on this one ! <33 keep it up
Comment by darkprincess: Oct 1, 2008 6:47 pm
This is incredible..... I absolutely love this one. Keep up the good workComment by crystalball: Oct 3, 2008 6:38 am
beautiful, I feel the painComment by Villager: Oct 3, 2008 8:11 am
Wow this is wonderful workComment by 4everbrokenhearted: Oct 3, 2008 10:17 am
That's amazing.Comment by sanssoul: Oct 3, 2008 8:08 pm
WOW that was great... very impressiveComment by heartlesslover: Oct 6, 2008 4:16 pm
Awesome poem, I can relate with this poem. I love the way it is put togetherComment by RescueMe: Oct 6, 2008 7:04 pm
oh my god this is so awesome with so much emotion and so deep this is just amazingComment by lostangel: Oct 8, 2008 7:06 am
So touching, this is perfectly written , I love itComment by ifonlysheknew: Oct 8, 2008 7:18 pm
Good poem structure and content. You can tell this is from the heart.Comment by DakotahStymiest: Oct 8, 2008 8:14 pm
This poem almost made me cry!Comment by wwwdotcom: Oct 10, 2008 9:18 am
wow awesome poem, i like the duality. Sad thoughComment by poemwrittingpipsqueek: Oct 15, 2008 4:26 pm
beautifully tragicComment by gothinlove: Oct 15, 2008 7:35 pm
Omg, what a powerful poemComment by inthecold: Oct 15, 2008 7:56 pm
I feel the pain. It makes me cryComment by mischeifinvain: Oct 15, 2008 9:59 pm
nice use of language, the rhyming scheme was really nice too! good job, you've got talent. poetry is a beautiful way to express your emotions and it shows that you have a beautiful heart when you pour it over the pain of your experiences.Comment by lilmizblueyes: Oct 16, 2008 8:27 am
I love this poem. Its totally from the heart.Comment by hardbody17: Oct 16, 2008 11:15 am
i'm really sorry who ever had 2 go through this cause i know how it feel be in a situation like this.i just went through one with my baby.Comment by lostangel: Oct 17, 2008 8:15 am
It brings tears to my eyes everytime I read itComment by TearsofAcid: Oct 19, 2008 8:13 pm
It is so sad and perfectly written. excellent poem.Comment by lostnlove: Jan 13, 2009 7:00 am
I can relate to this poem. It really moves me to tears.
Great writing
Comment by breathtakingly1evil13: Oct 20, 2008 3:42 pm
i cannot quit reading this i love itComment by poeticangel102: Oct 23, 2008 1:56 pm
awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww its so sad, i wanna cry tears of joyComment by trilogy: Oct 24, 2008 1:37 pm
Incredible poem, very touching.Comment by matt23: Oct 24, 2008 6:47 pm
I feel for you, as i'm sure many of us can relate. Very nicely done.Comment by nakeeda: Oct 25, 2008 11:07 pm
awwww this is incredible you have put into words what so many of us have felt
Comment by cruelheart: Oct 26, 2008 8:12 pm
Amazing.. we can all relate to this. It is a sad time in our life.Comment by SSSS1010: Oct 29, 2008 11:53 am
GREAT POEMComment by BloodLustingElf: Oct 29, 2008 7:27 am
wow, such a sad poemComment by TheLostOne16: Oct 29, 2008 4:37 pm
Kahlil Gibran
-Ever has it been that love knows not its own depth until the hour of separation.
Your not alone..
Comment by Elizajh: Oct 29, 2008 7:58 pm
I know this may be weird, but I actually started to tear up during this poem. It's either 1)it's sad or
2)I'm really sappy
Love the lines "I no longer live in color
My world is black and white"
Comment by HeartlessAngel: Dec 1, 2008 11:26 am
So sad....Amazing poem though.Comment by SPAGACKULA: Oct 30, 2008 3:27 pm
Somebody get the crown,and roll out the red carpet,!
Super Dynomite Masterpiece,!!!!!
There's no doubt knowing what you are good at!!
Comment by laurajones75: Oct 30, 2008 6:51 pm
That's how I feel today ... 
Comment by sweetheart: Oct 31, 2008 1:46 am
wow nice poemComment by luv4him021291: Oct 31, 2008 8:59 pm
I felt you're pain... I went through something like that with my ex-boyfriend.Comment by angelface201621: Nov 2, 2008 12:36 pm
that was so touching!Comment by mzbrowneyez: Nov 2, 2008 1:28 pm
wow im really feeling your poems..Comment by LuvHarmony: Nov 2, 2008 5:25 pm
nevva give up on luv no matter how hurt u may b cuz there r a lot of otha great ppl out there made 4 u u jus gotta give it anotha shot like i did now i am 4 evva happyComment by crystal1234: Nov 4, 2008 1:23 pm
soo cute i just lost ma boyfriend too but shit i will rock your world hit me up kiki Comment by ArcAngel: Nov 6, 2008 9:31 am
great poem and well put together.Comment by Trinityblood: Nov 7, 2008 4:53 pm
i liked the imagery alot good jobComment by celtic: Nov 9, 2008 2:23 pm
it is really creative keep it upComment by XxXBleedingRosexXx: Nov 9, 2008 9:26 pm
Hm, not many poems can touch someone. But this is one in many that will touch someone whom is going through the same thing.
I like it.
Comment by Cornflakes: Nov 10, 2008 7:10 am
I Love It. It Brings Back So Many Memories For Me...Its Amazing.Comment by WaveBandit: Nov 10, 2008 8:59 am
Unbelievable piece, i think its really great, really touching agree with above Comment by gothinlove: Nov 10, 2008 6:36 pm
Absolutely great. I love this poem so muchComment by appledude141: Nov 10, 2008 9:57 pm
Very beautiful, should be in one of the most famous poems ever!Comment by lostpoet: Nov 11, 2008 4:44 am
Very touching..it brings out the emotions in me..the tears of sadnessComment by JO: Nov 15, 2008 1:40 am
This is a very good poem, feel the pain all the way, sorry to hear what she did, know the feeling, happend to me.Comment by Inquietsolitude: Nov 15, 2008 10:30 pm
Wow, I feel your pain. Comment by angelheart16: Dec 3, 2008 8:06 pm
awwwwwwww this poem is so sad, and i can so relate, you love someone so much, but you know you can never be together or have a relationship like you used, believe me i've been there, and i still morn today, for me its been more than 8 months just trying to get over the one i love, brandon keep writing, message me whenever you like, i'll listen
Comment by XxsidniestarxX: Dec 5, 2008 7:43 pm
Wow. There is so uch you are saying in this poem. One. that you loved someone and Two. That you wish to love someone again. If you ever want to talk just let me know... i'll help.Comment by jadead: Dec 8, 2008 7:06 pm
incredible poem that is so sad and many can relate to itComment by megsj: Dec 11, 2008 1:17 pm
i love this poem good jobComment by FlawsAndAll: Dec 12, 2008 3:22 pm
this is a beautiful but bittersweet poemComment by lonelygal: Dec 14, 2008 2:40 pm
sad, but great poemComment by BlackRose: Dec 14, 2008 2:52 pm
thats a really nice ass poem... i have felt the same way many of times so this poem really hit home for me... really goodComment by TiffantAnnLoganAdams: Dec 15, 2008 8:28 am
great poem. It seems that you have a lot of fans. Have you ever considered publishing your poems in a book? If you did, I would be one of the first ones to buy it.Comment by Haylo: Dec 17, 2008 2:26 pm
beautful and full of soulful and full of life emotion. u really sounds like, i dont know if it did or not, that happened to u. u have talent.
Keep writing!
Comment by trishaaa08: Sep 30, 2009 6:47 pm
always be inspired! yaay. nice poem i love itComment by Yama321: Dec 22, 2008 2:09 pm
you have a lot of good poems man..i really like the way you right because its kinda like how i write.hope u check out my poems.Comment by true: Dec 25, 2008 4:44 am
thanx brandon..... ur poem is cooooooool..... B always 1 of the best..... and let ur soft words touch the hearts.....Comment by true: Dec 25, 2008 4:48 am
hey man... if you have some poems about men; i'd b grateful to read them....Comment by RedStone: Dec 29, 2008 3:56 am
nice adaptation of feelings to wordsComment by poetrylove017: Jan 18, 2009 9:06 pm
Amazing!! I just love your poems!! Especially this one!! =]Comment by Angel: Mar 16, 2009 2:27 pm
great poem and sad aswell. Comment by livelife: Jan 1, 2009 6:24 pm
Good poem nice flow. Good luck others will come and go. Comment by Blackrain: Jan 2, 2009 3:33 am
very touching poem
great writing
Comment by evie0417: Jan 2, 2009 12:26 pm
wow i really love it, i am so sorryComment by lacey618: Jan 3, 2009 10:35 pm
truely amazing i know how u fill if u wanna talk im herComment by DarkCobra: Jan 7, 2009 11:38 am
HOLY SMOKES THERES LIKE A MILLION COMMENTS!!!!!!!! Nice poem tho deserves all these comments o.oComment by lioness: Jan 8, 2009 3:35 pm
Im jealous!!! so many great comments, and all true. A beautiful poem, A raw talent!look forward to reading more of your work.Comment by mage: Jan 12, 2009 7:01 pm
Brilliant. I loved it.Comment by DarkAbbey: Jan 12, 2009 8:49 pm
This is so touching and truely sadComment by lostnlove: Jan 13, 2009 10:24 am
excellent piece
really expresses that feeling of lost love
Comment by chelseaatpeace: Jan 13, 2009 8:40 pm
soooo touching!omg that was so from the heart amazing jobComment by jenskie78: Jan 14, 2009 11:17 pm
nothing is so certain. when you will love someone, you have to take the risk of being hurt!Comment by Flower: Jan 15, 2009 10:21 pm
I am feeling like this right now. Great job of putting the feelings to wordsComment by EmperorMosta: Jan 16, 2009 7:53 am
this one also inspired me on writing another poem, its great by the wayComment by guymcperson: Jan 16, 2009 9:06 am
This is absolutly amazing. And I see everyone else thinks so.Comment by RazorBladeAngel15: Aug 7, 2009 12:44 pm
this is beautiful so poetic and pretty and amazing ^^;Comment by fallingagain: Jan 17, 2009 9:55 pm
amazing piece of writing
such heart felt words
so many can relalte to this poem
Comment by lifendslovedoesnt: Jan 18, 2009 12:28 pm
this is amazing, and very sad, but all in all, I can relate, and I loved it.Comment by dead2you55: Jan 25, 2009 2:37 pm
amazingComment by secretpoet89: Jan 25, 2009 10:24 pm
good poem. I felt this way once and i learned time heals everything. It may take a while but things will always get better.Comment by lionxxlamb: Jan 26, 2009 10:48 am
I know how you feel, I have had that feeling so many times...Comment by twilightpoet: Jan 31, 2009 11:29 am
wow i can totaly rletae to the situationComment by angeloflove: Feb 4, 2009 11:39 am
This is really good! I love it, makes me remember of a situation before. It`s sad but I like it it`s my style.Comment by messengerbird: Feb 4, 2009 11:55 am
really good poem. ive had far too many days where i cant stop crying either.Comment by Mari: Feb 4, 2009 2:24 pm
Love the poem I know how you feel, Great w0rk Comment by imissucheez: Feb 6, 2009 12:39 pm
wow great poem
the person i loved left me too
Comment by forgottenfairy: Feb 7, 2009 1:03 pm
Your poem is amazing truly a heart wrenching tale. but wonderfully written. Comment by kendaray: Feb 8, 2009 12:47 pm
very touching Comment by Iamyou: Feb 9, 2009 7:53 pm
My god, that is heartbreakingComment by hardwiredflaws: Feb 19, 2009 1:41 am
wow, for sure amazing. very sad. but so amazingly written.Comment by Haylo: Aug 31, 2009 7:39 pm
This is really, very good. no big words or deep fragments. but it doesnt need that. It is simply beautiful. Keep writing!Comment by Haylo: Aug 31, 2009 7:38 pm
this is really, very good. it is very simple, no big words or deep fragments. it is just simply beautiful. Keep writing!Comment by courtneytland: May 1, 2009 11:10 am
this is really good i loved it
Comment by onlyliving: Jun 29, 2009 4:37 am
Good stuff.
Very much telling a story that people can relate to.
Comment by hollisun: Mar 2, 2009 6:01 pm
i really liked it. it was really good. but im sorry.Comment by indecisive: Mar 3, 2009 7:14 am
wow, thats an amazing poem. sorry for the pain you had to go through though.Comment by juicey145: Mar 3, 2009 12:53 pm
wow!!! amazing.
i'm sorry that you too had to experience a heart break.
great poem!!!!
Comment by neverinlove: Mar 7, 2009 7:01 pm
woah alot of comments i dont blame them this was amazingComment by cauterisedscar: Mar 9, 2009 6:49 am
I agree with them all simply awesome Comment by lonely: Mar 10, 2009 7:50 pm
i lost my boyfriend saturday he just walked out on mi i know what it iz like 2 cry allday cuz that iz what i doComment by forgottenfairy: Mar 11, 2009 7:56 pm
So sad but wonderfully written well done. hope things get better.Comment by taz028: Mar 18, 2009 6:28 am
nice.Comment by LittleDareDevil: Mar 18, 2009 10:40 am
Awwhhh! That is very sad. But no worries cause I had my heart broken to my boyfriend Monday, I couldm't stop crying in the last 2 now 3 days.Comment by billyw00t: Mar 18, 2009 12:00 pm
thanks for sharingComment by scared2bealone: Mar 19, 2009 3:25 am
i love it!!!!!!! very good... no 'very good' isn't right... it's just simply magnificent wow!!) just keep inspiringand please keep writing
a very good poem Comment by no1knows: Apr 16, 2009 8:04 pm
I love this poem...
And I can feel the emotion...
This is basically how I fell right now because of what is going on right this minute...
And I can't stop crying right now.
Comment by Vix: Mar 23, 2009 3:01 am
One word. AMAZING! Comment by Heartbroken120: Mar 29, 2009 9:02 am
This is so amazing! Great job!!!!! Just simply wonderful!!!Comment by neverinlove: Mar 31, 2009 11:37 am
this was very beautiful i relate to it so much and you think that i can pnly relate to it as boy gurl no im bi so i really no what you mean my heart has been hurt so many times and this poems hows that im not alone so thankyou it was a pleasure to read itComment by christinaxxnguyen: Apr 11, 2009 1:29 pm
You are an amazing poet. Comment by Ruth123: Apr 7, 2009 12:24 pm
wow thats amazzing!Comment by SexyLove: Apr 9, 2009 12:26 pm
wow this is a great poem Comment by punkangelstar29: Apr 10, 2009 3:09 pm
I've read this a few times and I just keep coming back to it.
I love it! It's amazing.
Comment by Shortie14: Apr 14, 2009 7:53 pm
nice....Comment by Writeitout: Apr 15, 2009 6:08 pm
I've been there beforeComment by khaleel: Apr 16, 2009 12:02 pm
very emotionalComment by lawbound22: Apr 18, 2009 2:57 am
wow. i am there. very nice. i feel it deep. touching. great work.Comment by shono: Apr 20, 2009 1:52 am
greatttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttComment by ShilahTempleton: Apr 20, 2009 8:16 am
wonderful work!!!!!!!! ♥Comment by cyndel: Apr 21, 2009 6:21 pm
this poem is absolutely amazing. great jobComment by mcmil: Apr 25, 2009 8:38 am
beautiful poemComment by gabriella: Apr 27, 2009 6:51 am
Amazing piece of work
It describes what a lot of us
have been through
Comment by angeliclove: Apr 27, 2009 6:36 pm
Very beautiful poem on a very sad subject
Amazing writing.
Comment by lostangel: Apr 27, 2009 6:40 pm
This is such a touching poem.
I can relate to this with all
of my heart.
Comment by mytragedy: Apr 27, 2009 6:42 pm
wonderful and sadComment by lexi: Apr 27, 2009 6:45 pm
your poem is powerful and touching.
I really like your style
Comment by rosemary: Apr 28, 2009 7:35 pm
i love it its sweet ans emotinal i love it likesoooo muchComment by XfroggieluverX: Jun 24, 2009 12:52 pm
this is amazing.
I feel the same way.
The love of my life walked out to. and i have not been the same sence that day.
Comment by LayalS: Apr 29, 2009 10:25 am
so powerful nd touching
<3 i just cants top crying as i read each letter nd each word its like omg plz stop me before i drown in my own tears amazing
Comment by pardeep2: Apr 30, 2009 4:29 pm
that was a really deep poem <3Comment by nene: Apr 30, 2009 5:13 pm
"With her she took my heart" pretty intense. you'll find someone..no worriesComment by xxxpainxxx: May 3, 2009 5:37 pm
Damn, I never thought that would happen to good people, don't cry.. everything will be better, I promise it will.Comment by MrsPerez: May 6, 2009 8:23 am
This is a great poem, and expresses your feelings, and just remember that she left a great guy and never give up on finding the one person for you.Comment by princessalis2010: May 6, 2009 10:56 am
that just brought tears to my eyes considerin me and my gf just departed from each other..Comment by rhczar: May 7, 2009 6:03 am
i feel the same i lost the one i love... great jobComment by twistedmoon: May 15, 2009 1:06 pm
great one it's heartbreaking to see our loved ones walk away from us. people change everyday and forget their promises. we should learn to let go...for we will be much stronger and better person after that. Comment by poeticissues: May 15, 2009 8:13 pm
this is good one!!Comment by AndrewsBabyGirl09: May 17, 2009 5:35 pm
This is a great poemm.Comment by XXbrokenXX: Jul 18, 2009 11:01 pm
i LUV it.
thts rlly cute
Comment by anirudh995: May 19, 2009 10:06 am
vry nice poem man....b happy always...difficult to do dn sayn bt still may god bless u....Comment by Xxwilliamlover93xX: May 19, 2009 12:39 pm
OMG brandon this is a great poem i think that u are very talented keep on writing Comment by kaylyebrooke: May 27, 2009 5:42 pm
this is amazing
i love it
Comment by gelid: May 29, 2009 12:10 am
wow, that is an amazing poem. though im kinda late on reading it.Comment by Tacolilygirl: May 30, 2009 4:30 am
I like this line the best
The hours passed like seconds
When our two hearts were one
The seconds passed like hours
After she said that she was done
Comment by SimplyB: Jun 4, 2009 12:06 pm
wow your poem nearly made me cry, because this is the exact situation i currently
stand by.
Comment by mjbensch: Jun 5, 2009 7:20 am
Thats really good... pulls the heartstrings.. can completely relate to the person behind the words...Comment by Angelsvoice: Jun 6, 2009 4:24 pm
that is incredably beautiful.Comment by cRaZtYsTaR: Jun 11, 2009 5:41 am
yo that is f***king alsome
cool mad that i what i feel right now
Comment by DamagedHeart: Jun 13, 2009 12:27 pm
all i gotta say is wow!Comment by Greyhoundfb: Jun 15, 2009 1:06 am
MAN YOUR REALLY GOOD SHI*Comment by bluzzfan: Jun 18, 2009 4:52 pm
Awesome poem! You got exactly how I'm feeling right now!Comment by altheamaraj: Jun 21, 2009 1:39 pm
i relate, y they say something and do otherwise,saying love you forever and then leaving you for someone else... till now im still in this scenario, hurting tooo muchComment by johnnyPG: Jun 22, 2009 1:05 pm
Dude...i honestly love it, I am in a situation like this, this poem moved me.Comment by girlX: Jun 23, 2009 3:14 pm
i really like your poem...it show the truth about love and how you feel about it most of the time this is a really personal topic to write about and you wrote about it soo good i love it Comment by MZCUELLAR: Jun 24, 2009 12:37 pm
well hey i really think ur poem is so sweet n nice i luv it keep da gud wrkComment by Shelo: Jul 2, 2009 5:16 am
Love it <3Comment by BellaBelle: Jul 15, 2009 3:00 pm
awww i liike itComment by heartbreakbny: Jul 23, 2009 8:43 am
this is a great poem, i can relate a lot to thisComment by kc822: Jul 30, 2009 9:02 pm
Wow, man. I really liked this one. Good job!Comment by NixNi: Jul 24, 2009 10:13 pm
i'm speechless. its amazingComment by Silver: Nov 4, 2009 11:25 am
Omfg i love this poem Comment by jmdkblopez5: Aug 2, 2009 6:00 pm
This exactly how I feel. I love your poem, thank you.Comment by AnitaLyn: Aug 8, 2009 10:52 pm
Great poem, reminded me of when my husband lefy me........great poem. Thanks for allowing me to readComment by Julieelovesyou: Aug 10, 2009 11:58 pm
im at loss for words to describe this poem..i absolutely love it!!!i feel liike that right now Comment by howdyyy: Aug 11, 2009 2:52 pm
art.Comment by DyingIsYourLatestFashion: Aug 15, 2009 10:27 pm
woahh speechless!Comment by babyboogt82886: Aug 18, 2009 5:20 am
Agree...speechless!Comment by oneflyguy: Aug 20, 2009 9:41 am
You have a very simple fluid style but your words are effective. Well written.Comment by scarredemotions17: Aug 21, 2009 5:46 pm
that was excellent ireally loved it i felt the emotion.Comment by dalila056: Aug 22, 2009 12:56 pm
wow! What an amazing poem. You did a really good job on it. It was really sad though.Comment by TeffaTheVampireGoddess: Sep 5, 2009 5:20 am
I love this poem! It's passionate love that feel so unrequited. I can relate so much to your work of art. I wish you happiness for the rest of your life.Comment by deejay: Sep 12, 2009 3:48 am
This is such a powerful piece!
I particularly love the repetition of the first and final line.
Glorious!
Comment by DanielJacquesCain: Sep 24, 2009 3:10 pm
Emotional, good rhythm. NiceComment by SmilingTragedy: Sep 24, 2009 7:20 pm
Well Den Brandon i liked this peom u r really goodComment by mizzdietrichforever: Sep 25, 2009 11:01 am
o my gosh i love it keep up the good work
Comment by mcgeorge40: Oct 15, 2009 3:03 pm
I loved it. Totally awesome. Really well done.Comment by sincerlyme: Oct 20, 2009 11:23 am
I can relate so much to this
Comment by Cassandra: Oct 22, 2009 10:30 pm
This is absolutely beautiful.Comment by Acheron: Oct 30, 2009 8:47 am
the best poem i have ever read Comment by HeartbrokenEmo: Oct 30, 2009 7:41 pm
This poem made me tear up a little because i can relate too it, You have soo much talent... Amazing stuff!!Comment by xmyxlastxbreathx: Oct 30, 2009 10:14 pm
This is absolutely amazing!!!!! Wish i could write as well as you! Comment by simplewords: Nov 1, 2009 8:58 am
its amazing how you can love someone and give them your all and hitherto all those feelings are returned to you in a trash bag.Comment by Springbok: Nov 5, 2009 8:53 am
I like itComment by TiffantAnnLoganAdams: Nov 16, 2009 10:41 am
I loved itComment by Leeshio: Nov 16, 2009 6:49 pm
that was absolutely brilliant!