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I Can't Stop Crying Today

I can't stop crying today
My world walked out the door
With her she took my heart
For I will love no more

The hours passed like seconds
When our two hearts were one
The seconds passed like hours
After she said that she was done

She was going to love me forever
At least that is what she said
Her heart belonged to someone else
That is what her letter read

I no longer live in color
My world is black and white
I always wonder what she is doing
As I lie awake at night

I hope tomorrow is better
This is what I pray
But right now my heart is broken
I can't stop crying today

by Brandon
posted on 09/07/2008

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Comments: 453

Comment by chasedbythetruth: Apr 11, 2012 1:30 pm
one word WINNER
Comment by Naazilicious: Apr 10, 2012 12:11 pm
Awesome, love it
Comment by Listain: Mar 29, 2012 10:57 pm
I have felt this pain before, Truly amazing how you capture the feeling well.
Comment by Droconio: Mar 8, 2012 12:12 am
We all know how it feels. Only few know how to put it in words though. Especially this beautiful
Comment by taybabe1300: Dec 31, 2011 11:57 am
This is an amazing write, I can truely relate to what you must've felt.
Comment by livelife: Dec 10, 2011 8:59 am
GOOD REAL GOOD...
Comment by blondie610: Nov 23, 2011 8:49 am
very nice
Comment by frozenheartofmine: Oct 31, 2011 8:24 am
i feel it... painful it is... so sad
Comment by seachange777: Oct 28, 2011 1:03 pm
I echo your feelings...
Comment by Willowhisper: Oct 20, 2011 5:15 pm
wow good poem keep writing!

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