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I Can't Break Free

I'm like a blackened puzzle,
full of missing pieces
and you fill the spaces,
smoothing out the creases

Take my soul apart
and put it back together
and tell me that it'll be alright,
make it all better.

Tell me that it won't happen again,
and make me feel alright
but in my heart I know you'll be gone by morning's light

You smile and tell me that we'll be together
but the truth is that I'm teatherd,
to you, this world and all that is around me
never able to break free.

by shatterdxXxseasons
posted on 12/18/2007

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Comment by HoldingOnForNow: Dec 18, 2007 10:39 am
wowww! i like it alot...great job
Comment by lotsofstuff321: Dec 18, 2007 10:53 am
hey... good job!!!!!! I like it
Comment by Babigurlbroken: Dec 18, 2007 11:18 am
i wouldnt say good job because that is not how you compliment someones poetry... you have excellent talent and I hope you continue writing.
Comment by foxyb01: Dec 18, 2007 11:41 pm
bravo jus wonderful
i cud really relate to u keep writing
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