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I Saw The Real you

i thought i was in love with her but she never seemed to notice
it hurt sometimes and i used to get really pist

she would always go hit the barz and drink and have fun
ay im a partier too but we were a couple then,(hun)

i felt rejected when you came holding your arms out to kiss me
c/ i kno at the strip clubz and barz you'd rather be
i dont understand,i thought i made you happy

it was nice to have you willing to open your legs when wanted
but babe thats not all i saw in you
i saw an innocent girl trapped and feeling blue

when i told you what i saw you just looked at me and cried
and said im over you..that moment a part of me died

well Lauren its been a month since then and im doing fine
but just remember i knew the real you..it was deep inside

by Understandme
posted on 06/12/2007

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Comment by luvonlylasts4evr: Jun 12, 2007 11:38 am
awww...thats so sad...I hope she'll realize what a mistake leaving you was soonSmiley I hate seeing people sad...it makes me want to cry and switch places with them so they dont have to go through all this shit...well anyways...great poem I love it!!
Comment by Findingyou: Jun 12, 2007 12:01 pm
cool poem..its understandible...btw thanks for commenting my poem!
Comment by PoemWritingGuy: Jun 13, 2007 5:21 am
Sad face My two best friends have been dating for about four months and today they broke up. The two of them had never been happier and now they're both sad. Especially the guy, when I talked to him about it, he had the same he had before he cried, saying his father had died. I don't know why she dumped him but I know neither of them are happy.

Anyway, enough about that, I just wanted to share it. Great poem. I'm voting it up.
Comment by brokenXbruisedXbleeding: Jun 13, 2007 2:19 pm
that is so sad. people get scared when people see the real them.
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