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I'll Wait Forever

She drew a line
upon the ground
I cannot pass it
so I frown

I gain some courage
I build some steam
I cross the line
in pursuit of my dream

She turns surprised
Who crossed her line!
What a fool
he will only waste time

It is I!
I stand and proclaim my love.
She shuns me away
She pushes, she shoves.

She takes two steps back,
then once again impedes my path
but now with a wall
an infinite glass stall

And then I fall
I see the ground approaching
But I do not break my fall
For I see it just
That such great love
brings such a great fall

I struggle to my knees
and lean upon the glass
I stare at her beauty
She passes not a glance

I look at the ground between us
the two steps I'll never tread
I'M ONLY TWO STEPS AWAY
might as well be dead.

I look to the stars and cry,
"WHY SUCH PAIN!"
The wind howls with me
as I feel a cold rain

I run out of breath
as I lower my gaze
to her beautiful eyes

I stare in contempt
at this stupid guard
I know there is no gate
so down I sit
Here, is where I will wait.

<i>I'll Wait Forever
But Forever Isn't Long Enough</i>

by wwwdotcom
posted on 02/18/2008

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Comment by babyboogt82886: Feb 19, 2008 6:27 am
great poem! very well written! Smiley
Comment by Poison: Feb 19, 2008 8:13 am
Very well done.
Comment by AnnaChick951: Feb 19, 2008 8:37 am
Very good.
Comment by crazyforcodymylove: Feb 19, 2008 8:28 pm
wow very good especially "It is I!
I stand and proclaim my love.
She shuns me away
She pushes, she shoves"
and the ending was very good to!!
vote up big time!!!









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Comment by Tequilla: Feb 20, 2008 11:35 am
Wow really like this, this is really good. Great poem!! =)
Comment by livelife: Feb 20, 2008 7:28 pm
well done!
Comment by cursedsoul: Feb 21, 2008 1:26 am
its a real gud 1...
Comment by TaylorLovesTylor: Feb 22, 2008 12:07 pm
this is really good
Comment by craziibabii: Feb 23, 2008 9:06 pm
I love how it's descriptive on what is going on and i also love how its very organized and has very good word choice! i understood everything! it was GREAT! Smiley
Comment by brokenXbruisedXbleeding: Feb 29, 2008 8:12 pm
i love it!
Comment by danielle: Mar 4, 2008 11:56 pm
it was awesome...
i'd read it over nad over again!!!
Comment by supbuttercup: Mar 15, 2008 9:04 pm
amazing! i really got a sense of what was happening. <3good job.

comment back!
Comment by Tearsoftheblood09: Mar 16, 2008 1:03 am
I like it and I been wait for the lost true love but its so hard.
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