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How He Broke The Heart

Insanity streaming through my veins,
All hell taking over.
Hot blood bringing to surface all my pain,
Death overlooking my shoulder.
So I cut open my arm and let all my blood drain,
From this experience will I get older?
Please tell me because I’m going insane,
Can I possibly get any lower?
Terror and horrible thoughts going through my brain,
Although I’m hot with anger, I don’t think I’ve ever felt colder.
Blood will forever be associated with the name,
His hands of my heart are the holder.
My temptation you must try to tame,
I will lose all control because my heart’s beholder…
Took my heart in his hand and he did maim
It, break it, tear it, kill it, by pretending to hold her.

by mybeloved
posted on 02/06/2010

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Comment by Healer: Feb 6, 2010 2:02 pm
hmmm
Comment by HeartsHome: Feb 6, 2010 1:53 pm
woah, Yeah, I'm with Alissa on this one, amazing.

Although I’m hot with anger, I don’t think I’ve ever felt colder. <-- wicked line right there, well all of it was, but this was just creative, amazing write.
Comment by flippinthrulife17: Feb 6, 2010 1:44 pm
whoa...This is just...I'm almost speechless. Pained an amazing. Deep and..just WOW, girl o.o Intense

Definitely votes up*

Amazing!
Comment by blueskies: Feb 6, 2010 2:53 pm
very good poem..not bad at all..
Comment by NaturalBeauty: Feb 7, 2010 8:35 am
wow...really really great job..
Comment by candyapple: Feb 9, 2010 1:01 pm
descriptive. i like it.
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