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house of pain

another promise broken
another life taken away
the pain building up
becoming to much to bare
the life i thought i knew
gone so quickly
finally free
i once thought
now back in this cage once again
happines can not be found
looking around
i remember all the memories
i worked so hard to forget
another lie told
another fight unfolds
whats keeping me here
that i do not know
waiting for a life
i know that will never be
pain and misery is all i see
all i know
this house is nothing more than the house of pain

by brokenXbruisedXbleeding
posted on 02/10/2008

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Comment by forevergone1790: Feb 10, 2008 10:33 pm
wow!! this is very good!!
amazing!!
Comment by 10000nails: Feb 11, 2008 2:22 am
it didn't rhyme, it didn't have good flow, but it still made me feel at home with the tumultuous things that remind me I'm alive.

So I'll vote up. Good beans.
Comment by kayla: Feb 11, 2008 4:34 am
Great poemSmiley
Comment by HeartlessAngel: Feb 12, 2008 1:24 pm
great poem
Comment by belleamour: Feb 15, 2008 7:36 am
It's great, poetry isn't about rhymes or flowing or being the best with literacy skills it's about expressing your feelings and helping people understand and experience your own problems aswel as your happiness and everything else you find worth expressing through your words. Keep up the good work x
Comment by cocoaluver14: Sep 14, 2008 1:47 am
GREAT poem I can fully understand what you are trying to say it is compltly awsome.
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