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Hopelessness

I broke his heart,
he broke mine,
now we're even, but still i cry.

I cracked his icy heart,
he broke mine clean in two,
i said, "i'm sorry"
he said, "fuck you"

Now he laughs behind my back,
while i try to ignore the pain,
the pain where my heart should've been,
the pain keeps coming like an oncoming train.

I have nowhere to go,
i'm lost and broken,
broken beyond repair,
thanks to the words he's spoken.

he said, "you're a hopeless cause,
a worthless pile of shit,
your a fucking emo,
now go jump in a fucking pit."

i did what he said ,
i went that extra mile,
i jumped off a cliff,
and now i cease to smile.

by HeLovesMeNot
posted on 04/03/2008

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Comment by thestewardofgondor: Apr 4, 2008 5:46 am
you are good you should write more poems!!!
i like it it is so sad and i love the ending! Smiley
Comment by fallenangel6636: Apr 4, 2008 7:26 am
holy crap, thats really good, and i think alot of girls and guys feel the same way.
Comment by babyboogt82886: Apr 4, 2008 7:27 am
wow...very well written!
Comment by ForgottenLove: Apr 14, 2008 3:29 pm
my favorite!!!! you have a wonderful knack of making the readers feel the emotion you're writing about. you are an amazing person inside and out, don't let anyone who dosen't know you judge you,they will most likely judge you wrong, keep it up, hang in there!!




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