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Honest

Honestly I keep failing.
Seriously I keep falling.
Lavishly I must stutter.
Honestly I'm appalling.
Kept for me for stalling.
Raunchily eyes balling.
Lovingly I'll stop calling.
Chronically you keep mauling.
Savagely I'm galling.
Quietly enthralling.
Tonight I stop falling.

Honest, I need to stop.
Softest side needs to drop.
Serious, my lungs shouldn't move.
Diaphragm, stay still and lips don't choose.
Sun so high, stop burning my heart.
She burns enough to break me apart.
Honest, I really should learn to stop.
Softer, cease making a fool and becoming a prop.
Serious, I'm fixated and kept on her love.
Diaphragm, don't take too much air from the legion above.

by Verasailles
posted on 06/11/2008

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Comment by bloodyrose: Jun 18, 2008 1:51 pm
i have to agree with all of u..and yeah..but zero4nunn is right...if this emotion brings mor epoems like this then write more! lol..awsome poem though
Comment by Clvisugo: Jun 11, 2008 7:49 pm
You need to pick yourself up hun... lol - that's such a lovely poem.
I really dig the line:
"Sun so high stop burning my heart
She burns enough to break me apart"
Wow! Smiley
Comment by Zero4Nunn: Jun 12, 2008 3:02 am
I would like to say you should relax but if it will deliver another work of this calibur maybe you should not. I also agree with Clvisugo. A very beautiful pair of sentences.
Comment by Babigurlbroken: Jun 12, 2008 8:42 am
`Nice way to put stuff into words... but relax dude..... ull find someone maybe even other than her.
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