Poem of Quotes Members
Please log in below, or sign up.



Forgot Password?
feather
arrow
Subscribe to a premium membership! Premium membership
Search for poetry anywhere! PoemofQuotes SE

Hold Your Breath

All I do is dream of you
I thought you would wear away
Torturing me baby, give me a sign
That you are alright and maybe
Maybe I could sleep tonight

All I need is a sign!
Or maybe your lips on mine...
To let me know
That your with me

Was it you who called me from private?
At 12:30 in the morning?
If only I was awake enough to answer
But I was dreaming about the time under the ceder tree
When it was so cold
That the blanket blew off
And you held me even tighter

You lost me...forget me
You know I can't do that
Could you? I wish I knew

by ZackeryDaley
posted on 07/03/2009

Vote: Vote upVote down
Comments: 15
Click here to send this poem to a friend

Comment by intahubhayati: Jul 10, 2009 7:44 am
lovely poen Smiley hey everyone im tryin to submit a poem, and it says that i need atleast two points, how do i get them ? HELP!!!!!
Comment by kc822: Jul 30, 2009 9:10 pm
I really liked it. I really felt the emotion
Comment by Essence: Jul 4, 2009 1:07 pm
a well-written piece
Comment by autumnangel1115: Jul 6, 2009 1:10 pm
Very good. Loved this poem.
Comment by loveslust: Jul 6, 2009 7:34 am
i like your poem. its really good. keep it up
Comment by KAS: Jul 7, 2009 11:52 am
awesome
Comment by Perpetual: Jul 3, 2009 3:13 am
this poem is amazing. I love how descriptive you are in it. and the title couldn't be anymore perfect for the poem.
=]
great write!
Comment by watsmyproblem: Jul 3, 2009 5:30 am
amazing.
you describe it soo well
Comment by AngelShadow: Jul 3, 2009 8:43 am
This is great The description was awsome! The emotion in this poem is all in the title! I love how you set it up that way.
*VOTES UP*
Comment by cwslaw: Jul 3, 2009 9:32 am
nice
Comment by wastedhope: Jul 3, 2009 9:55 am
described perfectly love it.
Comment by Heartbroken120: Jul 3, 2009 10:02 am
loved it. great write.
Comment by KAS: Jul 3, 2009 4:02 pm
yea great. can anyone tell me how to write on my profile page? im kinda lost. lol
Comment by girlX: Jul 4, 2009 11:42 am
thats amazing!!! i love the title it fits the poem so well
Comment by breathe: Jul 3, 2009 11:17 pm
awesome
Add a comment: