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Hold it together
Full moon tonight. Makes my heart excited and achy at the same time. When do things get better when they are already better than before but still horrible? Time holds the pieces of my broken heart as i search for the glue to hold it all together.
by RayneSong
posted on 10/12/2008
by RayneSong
posted on 10/12/2008
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Comment by darksideofme: Oct 12, 2008 6:42 pm
I wish it was a little longer. It just seems too generic. Like I've read it a thousand times before. you cut it short before anything could form..... I like where the idea was going though.Comment by hiddeninblood: Oct 12, 2008 6:26 pm
i really like this..the innocence is what hits me...good stuff...Comment by missingmom: Oct 16, 2008 7:20 pm
Naw...it's really good, I know how you feel, just moon-dreaming. I hope you find your glue. 