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Hello But Goodbye

Hello, I知 that little voice at the back of your head,
Hello, I知 here even thought you pretend I知 dead,
Hello, in the darkness I am that light,
Hello, I知 the one who calms your fright,

But, you never listen to what I have to say,
But, you simply pretend that I have gone away,
But, you simply smother my shining light,
But, you simply ignore me when I try to make things right,

So goodbye, I must leave you,
Goodbye, its time for me to go,
Goodbye, I知 sorry you couldn稚 except me,
Goodbye, this is a love you will never know.

by shirotora
posted on 01/03/2008

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Comment by jasonfoolio: Jan 3, 2008 3:12 am
i like it a lot.
reminds me of a poem i wrote ages ago but much better. good job
Comment by PoemWritingGuy: Jan 3, 2008 5:04 am
Very nice. Vote up! Smiley
Comment by TheDarkShadow: Jan 3, 2008 8:01 am
damn...great poem, love the flow in it

keep it up ^_^
Comment by JennaJo: Jan 3, 2008 11:39 am
It reminds me of an Evanescence song.
Comment by hydeia: Jan 3, 2008 3:04 pm
i love diz poem diz iz how dudez iz
Comment by UpAgainstTheWall: Jan 3, 2008 11:56 pm
Beautiful
i love it
Comment by PrayForMe: Jan 4, 2008 5:18 am
Awesome poem!, keep it up Smiley
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