Heart Broken Numb Dizzy and Weak

well if it's broken in more than a million pieces I hope it's only a million and 1 or not even the best heart surgeon in the world will be able to help you..... as far as the head thing..... welcome to my everyday life.....joking aside I don't think I'll say good poem but..... good emotion..... well no...... strong emotion....which is good in poetry......ummmmm....crap...well this is aquard.....hope you feel better.

short sweet and to the point.. alot of emotion in such a short poem... i'm sorry to hear u feel this way

your so mean!!!!
i will grow one day!!!!!

well hmm now there's more *bites* i like it still but its short kinda like u *tips her over*

im so so sorry i had done this to you i wish i could go back i really do if i could i would
you know i am tired of hurting those around me yet lately i have been and honestl i wanna let go because i feel like i have been doing everybody wrong...
i only want to make people happy and if i can;t than i don't want to be the one to upset people just to replace it and just because i have been lately all i want to do is give up.. i.. i just don't know what to do i am tired of being in long distance relationships i only wanna be with one person and you know i was with you first and when i hurt you i hurt myself and now basically all i have been doing is falling further i try pulling myself up everytime i catch ground but it is always to hard for me a try to reach to one thing and end up falling further and i cannot stop myself from falling i want to be there with you and all i continue doing is hurting you

i am so sorry i don't know what to do i wish for you to fogive me but before you do i need to find my place and i need to get shit straight
if only it is possible you could do what you can to talk to me than fine
if i have to give you my # i will just for you to be there for me i wanna be there for you but i continue going further and further astray i can never seem to make it right anymore all i am doing is falling apart and the more i hear of your pain the more i feel more of what you do in the doing of the horrible things i caused of you
i am so so sorry(((

strong emotion and very good!

I like it better now
Its good.

i think id have to agree with darksideofme..its exactly the way i feel...right now and prob will forever...lol....sorry..its a really good poem..im sorry for what you have to go through.im here if u want soemone to talk to.

i really like it because its straight to the point

im sorry u feel this way babe. im always here for u.

im here if u need to talk and im sorry u had to go threw such things but love the poem