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forgive me

please forgive me
let me be
if you open your eyes
you will see
the sorrow inside of me
i should mind my own
buisness and not butt
into yours
but when you look
at me like that
you give my heart
sores...
tears coming
out of my eyes
like you are
stabbing me
with knives
pain and sorrow
fills me
just open your eyes
and you will see me
and unplug your
ears and
you will hear my
sobs that fill the air
all i want you
to do is
stare and say
i forgive you

by NicholasScott
posted on 02/03/2008

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Comment by BEAUTIFULPHATMAMA: Jul 1, 2008 4:25 pm
Nice poem
Comment by forevergone1790: Feb 3, 2008 6:29 pm
terrific job!!
Comment by YourmyChemical: Feb 3, 2008 6:47 pm
great poem,
write some more=]
Comment by breathtakingly1evil13: Feb 3, 2008 7:19 pm
awe if it was me i would forgive u
Comment by NicholasScott: Feb 3, 2008 10:14 pm
thank youSmiley
Comment by DeadMoonChild: Feb 5, 2008 9:00 am
great poem
Comment by Tequilla: Feb 5, 2008 11:43 am
really good poem
Comment by HeartlessAngel: Feb 6, 2008 10:38 am
cool poem
Comment by kitten546: Feb 6, 2008 6:20 pm
awesome!!
Comment by Darryn732: Feb 7, 2008 1:37 pm
Good poem Smiley
Comment by kayla: Feb 9, 2008 4:51 am
Great writingSmiley
Comment by AnnaChick951: Feb 9, 2008 7:40 am
aw...i'd totally forgive you if it was me! Awesome poem.
Comment by Confuzed21: Feb 19, 2008 8:54 pm
Ohmygosh
Your such a good writer
It sucks to be put in those situations I kno but man your good.
Awsom3 poem
Btm

Confuzed
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