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Forever.........

Forever......
i know i said forever...
.........
but i dont think
that its possible
...........
no.......
.......
no longer
........
but i promised
to be there forever
when u needed me......
........
why does this happen?
i love someone
then they go for another
and yet still love me
..........
i promised forever.....
......
now i cant honor it....
.........
no
.....
i WILL...'
I WILL UPHOLD IT.........
whether its death
or life i will come through
and i will be there
with her
and you
.............
always will i be there.......

by Mangekyo
posted on 04/01/2008

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Comment by BEAUTIFULPHATMAMA: Jul 1, 2008 9:27 pm
Really good
Comment by BrokenHeartsTornUpLetters: Apr 1, 2008 12:00 pm
ummmmm....???
Comment by jussiechick: Apr 1, 2008 2:24 pm
its good but sad...
Comment by BloodLustingElf: Apr 1, 2008 7:35 pm
Love is such a complicated thing. I hope you can always uphold your promise. very good poem, sweet and sad.
Comment by HeartlessAngel: Apr 1, 2008 11:56 pm
very good poem...
Comment by AngelIndeed: Apr 2, 2008 9:08 am
VERY GOOD! Always a fan of your poetry!
Comment by meltedsnowman: Apr 2, 2008 6:20 pm
whoa...amzing..i love this one..confusing...
Comment by AFireInYourEyes18: Apr 7, 2008 5:50 am
i see... i know what your talking about... sorry man but she loves another... hold on to what you already have.. you'll only end up getting hurt Sad face.. man love for that girl dies hard... seems like everyone has fallen for her
Comment by AFireInYourEyes18: Apr 7, 2008 5:50 am
i see... i know what your talking about... sorry man but she loves another... hold on to what you already have.. you'll only end up getting hurt Sad face.. man love for that girl dies hard... seems like everyone has fallen for her
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