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forever

Forever, you promised
Forever, a lie
You promised the moon
And the stars in the sky.
You'd stolen my heart
Then left me alone
You were so cold
It chilled to the bone.
You left me with nothing
But tears and a past
When you said "I love you"
I thought it would last
But "I love you" found an ending
The 'us' and 'we' no more
You said you didn't mean to
But you hurt me to the core
So I guess that I'm the loser
Cause you've found someone new
But I'm still here, still all alone
Just crying over you...

by bryttboo
posted on 01/04/2008

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Comment by PrayForMe: Jan 4, 2008 4:39 pm
...This is by far among one of the most amazing poems I have ever read.
It's beautiful, I can totally relate.
Vote up. Smiley
Comment by aqua4ever: Jan 4, 2008 5:47 pm
This one is good. Keep it up!
Comment by andypandy114: Jan 4, 2008 9:51 pm
wow, out of all the poems i read i liked this one the most so far=] its nice
Comment by loveme77: Jan 5, 2008 12:23 pm
wow, that is amazing. I love how you expressed yourself and how you put meaning into every single word you wrote. This is beyond words - nice job.
Comment by misskenzie: Jan 5, 2008 11:40 pm
i really like this poem.
I dont think i could ever write anything as good like this one!
Comment by SaintJ: Jan 6, 2008 2:04 am
thumbs up mate! Pretty hardcore too... No worries alrite? Life's deals a handful of bad news... bu gives a breeze of good ones too.. =D
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