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Final Good-Bye

lets drink the posion together
embrace our love with forever
my darling your all i need
quiet this passion to feed

hold me till the waters calm
gentle whisper this tragic song
mend these wide open seams
with a passionate spoken dream

fill this dark,forgotten,empty void
with lies of lovers i rathered enjoyed
open the curtain to the tragic truth
expose this heart beating of youth

vacantly expressed are my thoughts
cassually dressed in the devil's plot
drenched in sorrow and painful good-byes
i entomb myself in mystic eye's

by phantomhearts
posted on 05/19/2008

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Comment by scarsofsecrets: May 20, 2008 3:13 pm
omg this is so amazing. very deep poem. i absolutely love it! Smiley
Comment by tobeloved: May 22, 2008 3:11 pm
the first line in the first stanza reminds me of the tragedy 'Romeo and Juliet'. I really like this poem, there's no words that i could use to say how good this poem is.
Comment by Bourne: Jun 2, 2008 11:48 am
it is an amazing poem. very tragic and rather dark. where did you get your inspiration for this??
Comment by Catwoman772: Jun 5, 2008 6:24 pm
i absolutely LOVE this
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