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Emptiness

What can you do, what can you say
To make this pain I feel go away
A pain in your heart that won't subside
To know your father doesn't even know your alive
Confused feelings of someone you know doesn't care
And you can't help feeling that it's just not fair
Is my face like his, are his eyes the same deep brown
Does he think of me when no one else is around
The same questions in my mind day after day
Soon to realize questions they'll stay

by Jenifer5
posted on 07/13/2007

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Comment by heatherprice: Jul 14, 2007 8:26 am
very good poem speaking from expirence the parent also has a void and yes our children are always on our mind sometimes we have no say in the situation and we always assume our childern must hate us because sometimes they dont know the exact situation that keeps us away but as to everything every one has a differnt story
Comment by kayla: Jul 17, 2007 2:41 am
great flow again, your dad doesnt even know your alive is that factual or the way you feel?
Comment by Jenifer5: Jul 17, 2007 8:15 am
Thanks...

That is the way I feel..he knows but just doesn't care.
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