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Either Way Didn't Matter In The End
I use to say what was on my mind all the time and with high hopes too.
But all that changed when I met you.
Everytime I told you what I felt,you would shoot me down.
After awhile it was a "shh!" game when I really wanted to ask if you even wanted me around.
There might have been bite marks on my tongue from all the things I never said.
I just assumed blood in the mouth was better than tears on my bed.
I learned to swallow the words and questions that were on the tip of my tongue.
I was too young,too naive to know communication was key.
Just too young.
After awhile holding back or letting go didn't matter anyway.
Because in the end you still left me.
by AngelicallyBroken
posted on 08/27/2008
But all that changed when I met you.
Everytime I told you what I felt,you would shoot me down.
After awhile it was a "shh!" game when I really wanted to ask if you even wanted me around.
There might have been bite marks on my tongue from all the things I never said.
I just assumed blood in the mouth was better than tears on my bed.
I learned to swallow the words and questions that were on the tip of my tongue.
I was too young,too naive to know communication was key.
Just too young.
After awhile holding back or letting go didn't matter anyway.
Because in the end you still left me.
by AngelicallyBroken
posted on 08/27/2008
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Comment by findmeinvisible: Aug 27, 2008 3:58 pm
thats really good. i like the tongue bitting thing and blood in ur mouth. its good imagery. Comment by asdfyz: Aug 27, 2008 6:25 pm
Aw. The poem aspect is really good. Your words and syntax and everything you said is so great. I love the poem hannah.
Still sorry about zack, but there are plenty of fish in the sea. He isnt your only option. You'll find someone twice as sweet and twice as hot as him in no time.
Comment by candy: Aug 29, 2008 8:35 pm
I LOVE IT. this poem is rly deep i can imagine everything. im sorry that u had 2 go through that tho, sometimes i have 2 swallow my words but i dont and speak my mind. which gets me in truoble especialy with my dad but loved the poem. keep writing and you'll find someone who deserves u dont worry u deserve better than him. Comment by oangelicenglishiano: Aug 31, 2008 8:08 am
This person sounds like a real jerk. I'm sorry you had to go through something like this. And it might not be my place to tell you this, but I kind of feel like you may be better off without him/her. We don't need negative people in our lives or negative influences. All they'll do is drag us down and leave us miserable and sad and lonely. You can't let yourself feel awful for this particular person's actions. There's nothing you could have done, because jerks are jerks. They don't change.
Keep your chin up and remember some people *do* care what you have to say. They want you to have dreams and goals and they love it when you ask questions. Curiosity is a gorgeous thing, just like the person you are.