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Echoes in the Wind

Your name is whispered through the halls of my heart like echoes in the wind.

Your face turns the dark abyss of loneliness into a cascade of happiness, but now it's like echoes in the wind.

Your face was a beacon of light in hard times, but now it's like echoes in the wind.
Your eyes shined in the moon's twilight, but fade like echoes in the wind.

You are the moon that controls the tides of my heart.

Your very smile calms the raging tempest of my soul.

Your eyes cast a spell on me and render me speechless, and your silky, dark hair gleams in the dying sun.

by Loboshinbo
posted on 03/04/2007

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Comment by Sinnocence: Mar 4, 2007 7:00 am
i enjoyed reading this its very streamy...id love it if u turn it into a slight rhyming verse.
Comment by tearsofrain: Mar 4, 2007 8:52 am
wow. perfect. i LOVE it. i can totally relate, and i love the use of the moon. teh whole tides thig was clever/ this is amazing. echoes in the wind...
Comment by ragingquiet13: Mar 4, 2007 12:39 pm
love it i agree with sinnocence about the rhyming thing but still love it and i like how u used the same line over and over again
Comment by zato: Mar 8, 2007 2:42 am
i love this one..nice very nice i like the title also echoes in the wind nice^_^
Comment by BlackPanther: Mar 9, 2007 2:27 pm
I really like this and i love the repetition of 'echoes in the wind'
Comment by HeartlessAngel: Jan 24, 2008 12:51 pm
cool poem
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