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Dull Razors make Crappy Ciggarettes

A dull blade teases suicidal flesh
It just doesn't kill you on the inside like you want
Dirty
Filthy
Disgusting

Makes you wish you could cut yourself
and die of cancer
but the steel that refuses to cut
Never will

Open flesh stings and burns
At least smoke silently kills you

It will be our little seceret

by darksideofme
posted on 09/24/2009

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Comment by Vampiressofmoonlight1: Sep 29, 2009 4:15 pm
i like this!!!
Comment by deadiam: Sep 29, 2009 6:23 pm
beautifully dark...ive always found peace in darkness
Comment by monkeyboy2416: Sep 25, 2009 7:38 pm
I do believe i get your point.

I think the cancer line over eggs the cake a tad (personal taste of course). But the second verse would be my favorite part without it.

And of obviously i agree.
Comment by flippinthrulife17: Sep 24, 2009 5:51 pm
*shivers
frowning deeply*
This--gahh

o.o
It's...dark alright
idk what it is about it but
it got to me...

interesting!
Comment by DarkestAngle: Sep 24, 2009 6:47 pm
wow,ummm.....intresting..........
Comment by Cole: Oct 9, 2009 9:50 pm
it's cool when you read this one faster or slower....
Comment by Freewriter91: Oct 13, 2009 9:21 am
I LOVE IT! best poem i have read today wish i could write like that!
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