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Drowning sorrows

Tomorrow you cant control
And today is just a memory of pain
Your drunk
Your not controlled
Im crying in the rain
Im trying to let go of things
Youve allready thrown away
This is me paying for my own pain
They way youve left me now
A suicide
A broken dream
An fallen angel
With broken wings
Im left with the same old thoughts
trying to remember what happened yesterday
My blurry state of mind
leaves love hurting me again

by coma
posted on 04/02/2007

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Comment by tradgity666: Apr 2, 2007 11:06 am
well done, great emotion

however you should try to work out something to get the flow smoother

i like it <3

what do you think of my poetry ???
Comment by MrNobody: Apr 9, 2007 3:41 pm
very good, i lyk the poem in general, theres just something addicting about it.
Comment by MechanicalAnimal: Sep 13, 2007 9:07 am
Love sucks, but this poem doesn't Smiley
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