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Coffeehouse Manor

Last night, after I chopped myself to pieces
I got a coffee and it was good.
But the atmosphere still held the questioning affair,
Since I failed at drowning confusion in blood.
But sometimes, they say, ignorance is bliss,
Which is only true when the bass plays a different chord than you thought.
So I'm sitting below the ochestra crying,
With a vanity mirror sitting in front of me.
And how glass works is such a delightful metaphor,
Casting one shadow on one plain and another on another.
So blame me please, because it's all my fault.
That I lost the drunk the last of the bean.
I pilfered the essence of the dining room table,
And slash-and-burn planted my crops in your heart.
It was what I wanted all my life, and you could've just told me.
Next time you decide to feed the flames,
Feed them with our combined effort.
At least converse about the coffeehouse manner,
Before you intend to draw the conclusion.

And so I sit in chopped up pieces.
Feeling worse than before.

by Verasailles
posted on 11/22/2008

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Comment by Vampiressofmoonlight1: Nov 22, 2008 4:09 pm
wowmthis is really good and i have to say i completely understand!!!!!
Comment by Kiite: Nov 22, 2008 5:54 pm
I like this. It's personal, yet uses such nice, tangible metaphors.
Some of it can be tightened up a bit, but that doesn't nearly downplay the tone of this. You write well. (I also like your username).
Comment by friendZdogZ: Nov 22, 2008 7:21 pm
wow! this is so english like! i mean an exprienced english teacher would be honored to read this. the wonderful use of metaphors amnd all. this is awesome!
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