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can you explain to me

can u explain to me?
why?
why i tell the air i breath
that everythings okay?
but my heart still beat fast wen
ur around
i let ur have my best before i gave yuh my worse
but still u know me like the back of your hand?
i try to run away way
but i was runnig in the palm of ur hand
so come out&play
lets have sum fun
so does it matter whos number 1?
,but hey! wait.
u might get hurt. but it okay it all worth it
u made a fool outta of me nd eveybody saw
so u really do care?
dnt yuh?
did u really love me?
did u really think about me?
so do u want me? ...or am i jus the wind that pass by ur eyes?
so explain to why u cant just be MINES?

by taybby
posted on 10/01/2009

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Comment by poemwrittingpipsqueek: Oct 1, 2009 1:35 pm
nice i like the whole hand thing.
Comment by taybby: Oct 1, 2009 5:11 pm
thank yuh
Comment by Rokkii: Oct 1, 2009 6:44 pm
I like the "wind that pass by ur eyes"
But I would suggest, that since this is poetry, to use the full words like "your" instead of "ur".
really good work tho. just kinda hard to read, which sadly distracts from such beauty.
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