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Can I watch you?

I'll watch you
But I wouldn't dare come close
From afar I'll watch the one I love the most
slipping away
getting further and further
Can I watch you?
I won't come any closer
I promise you, your the one I love
and I'll always remember you
as the one I'll always want
But I wouldn't dare
I can't try anymore
One more thing , and the feelings are gone
I gave up on everything
but not on loving you
Can I watch you?
there's nothing else I can do

by childOFtheNIGHT
posted on 05/28/2008

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Comment by MonsterBabies: May 28, 2008 8:44 am
Your talented at this keep up the good work
Comment by mysterygrl: May 28, 2008 11:56 am
I agree with monsterbabies! keep up the good work
Comment by lbrnware: May 28, 2008 1:26 pm
I really like this poem, this is a great piece

lbrnware
Comment by babylove: May 29, 2008 10:00 am
this poem reminds of my ex cuz he just broke up w/ me
Comment by drkromance: Jun 7, 2008 2:38 pm
Wow.. very deep and full of passion.
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