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What was true love

I know the one I love
She says she loves me too
I know it was true once
Now I am feeling blue

It started so well
Then it all fell apart
We picked it back up
And tried a fresh start

I cant go out
Without her on my mind
She's everything to me
But I feel she's blind

I feel cold and lonely
With floods of tears on my cheek
I make such a hard effort
Now I sit here cold and weak

I've given up so much
Just to be with her
Then the times I need her most
I sit cold in this chair

I do everything I can
To try to make her happy
Then like clockwork
It gets thrown back at me

I dont know how much longer
I can cope with this mis-treat
I love her so much
But soon I'll admit defeat

I'm sure theres someone else
I'm sure she thinks the same
So whats the point in going on
When miss.trust is the name

We had something so special
I've tried to make her see
But when I show true love
The way it always used to be

She treats me more different
To how it used to be

by PoetProdigy
posted on 09/20/2007

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Comment by PrayForMe: Sep 20, 2007 10:41 pm
Dude! Awsome poem!, I love it. Very well done. Vote Up : ]
Comment by kayla: Sep 21, 2007 1:26 am
Great poem, well writtenSmiley
Comment by sassicat: Sep 21, 2007 1:59 am
Well done, great poem!
Comment by broken3heart3: Sep 24, 2007 1:14 pm
whoa omg thats so heartbreaking something that could make someone bleed for some time... hm its still really pretty and flows so perfectly.. luv3 it <3333
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