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BYE! thank you

You told me you loved me!
I found that not true!
You held my hand,but no comfort given.
You helped my fears,yet gave me new ones.
Every thing we were,everything we are can't go far.
Broken hearted,ripped soul,yet you left some words untold!
Clouds are rolling in,the sky is turning black,sorry hun you aint comming back! Thanks you made everything worse!

by ELF
posted on 06/21/2008

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Comment by PrettyOdd: Jun 23, 2008 4:09 pm
very good
Comment by HoldingOnForNow: Jun 23, 2008 1:33 pm
i liek it..good job
Comment by 10000nails: Jun 22, 2008 11:53 am
Sick of emptiness? Sounds like it. I know, it's a lot easier to write when your pissed or depressed or hurt. Don't disregard it, use it. It's all ammo.
Comment by HarvardGirl: Jun 22, 2008 9:37 am
I agree with TheDarkShadow.
Full of emotion. Keep it up. Great poem.
Comment by Cry: Jun 21, 2008 10:56 pm
emotional, simple... but you can feel the point of the piece when you read it... good job...


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Comment by vero15: Jun 21, 2008 10:12 pm
jaja..well i know whatt you
mean! well iloveit (=
greatt jobb!
Comment by TheDarkShadow: Jun 21, 2008 9:25 pm
a lot of emotion
good work
vote up
Comment by WallFlower13: Jul 1, 2008 4:13 am
Great.
Keep it up.
Comment by ashuhhland: Jun 28, 2008 8:29 pm
you described a lot of guys in just a few lines. good job. i can relate.
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