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Broken Hearted

when good times come
they're followed by the bad
one minute you're joyful and happy
the next you're broken and sad
love is a dagger
that kills all of your fears
but it can turn on you
and put you to the ground with tears
you get back up
and give it another shot
you meet someone else
and soon you're back as if you forgot
but once again
it tears you down
you feel your regrets
as you lay on the ground
if only love was simple
as simple as it could be
this world would have less broken hearts
and more faces happy
but its not simple
but it always gives us a smile
to wear over our faces
in a love so worthwhile
its something special
something to never be parted
what makes it special is
once its gone.....

you're left broken hearted

by David93
posted on 07/09/2009

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Comment by intahubhayati: Jul 10, 2009 7:49 am
aw thats so true, very nice Smiley
Comment by xHurricane: Jul 9, 2009 6:59 pm
This poem is one of the truest poems I've ever read. you speak of love, the bright side, and also the dark side, but with every walk on the dark side of love, it's gets you more cautious, at least for me it does. It does tear you down, it's hard to truly get back up. Because we're afraid of the last part of the poem happening. Great Write, very eye opening.

Write on!

xHurricane
Comment by Essence: Jul 9, 2009 7:12 pm
That was one of the best poems i read on this site yet! keep writing! Smiley
Comment by John1993: Jul 10, 2009 9:39 pm
This is something that could relate to everyone, truly written, amazing
Comment by WinstonRiley: Jul 11, 2009 3:32 pm
broken hearts will mend, thankfully.
Comment by creativewriter93: Jul 11, 2009 3:50 pm
hearts will break and mend in time. very good
Comment by Heartbroken120: Jul 11, 2009 9:47 pm
nice poem. but thankfully broken hearts will mend in time.
Comment by Carogna: Jul 13, 2009 6:34 am
Nice poem...
Comment by rmfxa: Jul 14, 2009 9:39 pm
preach from the heart
Comment by soffi: Jul 14, 2009 9:40 pm
nice poem(:
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