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broken.

i cant live like this anymore.
its driving me insane.
its killing me,
slowly,
painfully.

its just not right.
nothing ever is anymore.
im just broken.
i cant be fixed.
might as well die.

dont want to do this.
but i've no choice.
its this,
or a miserable,
unhappy life.

life is too broken for me.
not worth it anymore.
no-one cares.
no-one would notice if i went.
so im just gonna go.

by BrokenBruisedBleeding
posted on 07/31/2008

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Comment by deadinside212: Aug 3, 2008 6:49 pm
i like this... i know how you feel. life is pretty messed up and twisted. it sux=/
Comment by deadinside212: Aug 3, 2008 6:50 pm
i like this... i know how you feel. life is pretty messed up and twisted. it sux=/
Comment by blackinatedsnow: Jul 31, 2008 6:42 am
I really like it . I always have that exact same words/idea about my life. Seriously.
Comment by masterpoetywriter: Jul 31, 2008 6:08 pm
great poem
Comment by customx: Aug 1, 2008 4:55 am
i would use a wider vocab but thats just me
Comment by xxBlackRainbowxx: Aug 2, 2008 9:09 pm
aw..i hope you dont "just go." sad.
but still, the poem is pretty good.
Comment by MonsterBabies: Aug 2, 2008 11:12 pm
Ive been through that too... But I decided to live for myself and noon else... You should try it. Nice poem by the way.
Comment by altheamaraj: Aug 3, 2008 9:18 am
almost everyone think what you think, even I myself as blackinatedsnow said, exactly what I feel. but dont let go, i want to read more of your works.
Comment by babyboogt82886: Aug 6, 2008 5:54 am
HANG IN THERE! I FEEL YOUR PAIN!
Comment by tinator02: Aug 9, 2008 5:48 pm
life is a bitch, and i know how you feel. we go through so much bullshit
that shouldnt matter but it still seems to affect us in ways unexplainable.
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