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Broken

I have so much to say
But nothing can come out
I have to hide who I am
Hide what I want to scream out loud

I hate myself
Who I am inside
But I fake a smile
To my friends I have to hide

I hold on another day
Holding on for love
Someone please rescue me
I need that girl that I’ve been dreaming of

You hurt me so much
It’s time to move on
But I can’t help but to think
That we still belong

Every part of me is dying
Why can’t you see
This bleeding soul before you
This hurt guy is me

These secrets of me
Lies that are buried deep
Cut myself just to bleed
You’re haunting my every dream

I wish someone
Would come into my life
Save me from hell
And stay by my side

by thedarknessinmys0ul
posted on 02/01/2009

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Comment by CallumNorman: Mar 17, 2009 11:19 am

well written .. greatly expressed ..

Comment by InternalBeauty: Feb 1, 2009 1:48 pm

This is a good poem,
And don't worry, you will find someone who makes you forget all about her, and you will be so happy...you just have to have hope. You can't give up, regardless of what people may say.
Great poem, I vote up. Smiley

Comment by Selene: Feb 1, 2009 2:33 pm

I feel your pain, I really understand this poem. brilliant job. vote up.

Comment by poetrylove017: Feb 1, 2009 2:55 pm

I think a lot of people can relate to this. It's really easy to understand. This is a wonderful poem! Vote up! =]

Comment by true: Feb 1, 2009 3:29 pm

you feel nothing...? how is that with all those feelings? gr8 poem.... cooooooooool... sweet poem... you will be saves... if you find your way.... well... just keep writing...

Comment by nothingisimpossible: Feb 1, 2009 4:37 pm

WOOOOOOOOOW!!!
INTERESTING POEM!!!
IT IS FULL OF FEELING!!!
I WISH YOU ALL THE BEST OF LUCK Smiley

I VOTE UP

KEEEEEEEEP WRITING

Comment by safwa: Feb 1, 2009 4:55 pm

hi ,,
it's a really nice poem ..

nice words full with right feelling ,,

keep going on ..

Comment by angeloflove: Feb 1, 2009 5:19 pm

Wat a beautiful poem, i feel your sorrow through your poem. but don't worry there will be someone for u one day.

Comment by JulietIsBetterOffDead666: Feb 2, 2009 6:34 am

i am going through the same thing. i am single and just got out of a relationship. it sucks to loose someone that you are that attached to and this part of the poem "I wish someone
Would come into my life
Save me from hell
And stay by my side"
its so beautiful. maybe we could talk a little more and get to know each other maybe i can be a friend to you. someone you can talk to about these things :]
i would be more then happy to listen.

but on the flip side this is a beautiful poem. i love it a lot, i think a lot of people can relate. :]

i hope you feel better soon about that girl.

know that i am here and you can talk

-aiden

Comment by angeloflove: Feb 2, 2009 6:35 pm

WOW AWESOMENESS!!! it's soo goood! VOTES UP!

Comment by AngelInDisguise: Feb 2, 2009 7:34 pm

OMGSH you are really amazing at writing poems Smiley

i really like this one. well i hope you do find that person in your life who you will love and will love you back just as much<3 its really sweet Smiley

well good luck!hope everything works out great. Ive been in the same place and i finally don't like the guy anymore. Ive been hurt so bad, and no one deserves it. if you are hurt cuz of the person then the sooner you realize your not all that happy the better off you will be because you will regain your happiness. just think of everything that can make you happy, and try to realize everything you have and not what you lost<3 well im not all that good at giving advice but i try Smiley

and i give you my best with everything Open smile

XxxRebeccAxxX

Comment by juicey145: Feb 3, 2009 9:59 am

wow!!i can def. relate. i love it keep it up

Comment by kittenlover511: Feb 3, 2009 11:11 am

i really dont no wat to say
but i really like it

Comment by gottsprofet: Feb 3, 2009 3:30 pm

good poem, would be more enthusiastic, however I'm feeling a bit depressed about a similar issue, but its good.

Comment by IntoxicatedDolly: Feb 4, 2009 6:31 am

nice peom ^^" i can really relate to it

Comment by oOSilentSoulOo: Feb 4, 2009 12:27 am

i can feel you're pain...
really...
*hug*

Comment by John1993: Feb 4, 2009 3:46 am

I know how that feels, great poem

Comment by cwslaw: Feb 4, 2009 12:24 pm

nice

Comment by lifeisdeath: Feb 6, 2009 9:04 am

i feel your pain im a lost girl and just as alone. ur poetry is great. love it.

Comment by klove: Feb 7, 2009 5:15 am

wow nice poem ur reallay talented good job

Comment by ThisGirl: Feb 8, 2009 2:46 am

Omg I know exactally how that feelss!!
Great poem btw Smiley

Comment by imissucheez: Feb 13, 2009 5:24 pm

great poem i know exactly how that feels i vote up too(:

Comment by mcmil: Feb 14, 2009 10:20 pm

wow
man, thats some talented poetry
keep it up

Comment by lifeisdeath: Feb 17, 2009 8:00 am

i feel the same my friend!

Comment by SimplyB: Feb 18, 2009 4:57 pm

love it!

Comment by squirrelluver2: Feb 21, 2009 6:42 pm

Great work!
I completely relate to it.
I fell in love,
But it didn't work out,
And now I don't ever want to fall in love again,
But I know I already am.
And I hope this time he can stay by my side.

Comment by kailey: Feb 24, 2009 11:11 am

wow touching

Comment by chelsea: Feb 25, 2009 7:55 am

omggg this is exactlyy how i feel!!!!

Comment by Kiaara: Feb 26, 2009 6:11 pm

Yeah. i know how you feel. thats a really good poem. it shows your feelings. and its exactly how i feel. and just know that youll find someone some day......thats what i keep having to remind myself.

Comment by freakofthenight: Mar 3, 2009 4:17 pm

this was a good poem!

Comment by kristenlovesyouz: Mar 12, 2009 6:12 pm

I love the emotion in this poem... Love really can be excruciating... I hope you have your broken heart mended. This is a very deep poem =)

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