Poem of Quotes Members
Please log in below, or sign up.



Forgot Password?
feather
arrow
Subscribe to a premium membership! Premium membership
Search for poetry anywhere! PoemofQuotes SE

Breathing in poison

i breathe in your love,
its like breathing in poison
its so toxic that i want to scream,
but i cant cause its choking me!

so now as i breathe in the air of
deathe that surrounds my nose
i want to scream!
i want to be set free.
From these grudges that you give me!!!

by Vampiressofmoonlight1
posted on 09/29/2009

Vote: Vote upVote down
Comments: 8
Click here to send this poem to a friend

Comment by flippinthrulife17: Sep 29, 2009 1:36 pm
o_o
wow...this is interesting
Comment by Karma92: Sep 29, 2009 3:39 pm
yea I agree with flippinthrulife
it seems I know the feeling
it sux
Comment by deathsmessanger: Sep 30, 2009 10:41 am
I Like it, some people dont know good poetry when they see/read it but i do. *smiles* keep it up krysta.
Comment by lancer08: Oct 2, 2009 1:03 am
nice....interesting!
Comment by Eliu: Oct 2, 2009 6:36 pm
Very interesting.
Comment by Mnin: Oct 3, 2009 12:12 pm
I like it very much. I know how it feels..
Comment by cutupangelDOA: Oct 11, 2009 12:00 pm
like a sick plauge engulfing my soul its rooted with the essence of darkness hideing in the shdows of light short word paralizeing me in awe
Comment by mcgeorge40: Oct 17, 2009 11:50 am
I think Kurt Cobain would have liked these as lyrics. Very song-like.
Add a comment: