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Break Me Apart

Your arms wrapped around me,
It warms my heart.
You made me happy,
Then broke me apart.

by ImThatBloodyMassacre
posted on 06/23/2008

Vote:

Comment by ImThatBloodyMassacre: Jun 23, 2008 7:01 pm

thanks guys. I really appreciate it.

Comment by undeadprincess: Jun 23, 2008 1:30 pm

even though its so short i can already tell how ur feeling or how u did when u worte this

dont worry ur not the only 1 Sad face

v good (Y)

Comment by lostinpoetry: Jun 23, 2008 12:13 pm

Short and sweet.

Comment by sadeyesgirl: Jun 23, 2008 12:31 pm

lostinpoetry said it short and sweet

Comment by AngelicallyBroken: Jun 24, 2008 5:34 pm

yes i can feel the emotion in this,and there is alot despite how short it is.

Comment by BloodyDaisy: Jun 26, 2008 2:38 pm

i know excatally how u feel im goin through it rite now...very short but alot of emotion!

Comment by chobit99: Jul 3, 2008 12:43 pm

It's short and to the point.
Even though it is short, it is very strong. Good job...keep on writing it all out!