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Boyfriend

i broke up wit ma boyfriend
who was ma best friend
he nearly cried
and i died inside
i miss him
all my lights have dimmed
i miss him loads
i feel like an ugly toad

he was lovely to me
too bad love comes as a fee

my heart is broken
will it ever stop hurting?

i've just hurt my best friend

by SaLaDs
posted on 03/15/2008

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Comment by tobeloved: Mar 15, 2008 11:02 am
aww... things will get better i'm sure =).
keep writing...
if you need to i'm here...
Comment by jussiechick: Mar 15, 2008 11:21 am
things will get better soon or later keep writing its really a good poem
Comment by MsKeys1707: Mar 15, 2008 11:24 am
this is a really good yet very sad poem
But those are always the best poems
Keep Writing and take care
P.S. I love the rhythm of the poem alsoSmiley
Comment by crazyforcodymylove: Mar 15, 2008 11:27 am
I agree ^^^ it will get better soon but why did you break up with him if you both feel like that maybe ya'll are ment to be if he cried and the inside you died
Comment by fallenangelx14: Mar 15, 2008 3:18 pm
umm if you miss him ASK HIM BACK OUTT. duh! lol. It'll get better soon. If you love each other just tell him you're sorry and go back out with him
Comment by oceanreverie: Mar 15, 2008 5:47 pm
i have to disagree with fallenangel, if you felt the need to break up with him in the first place, something inside you was telling you it wasnt right. It's quite possible you just miss the feeling of having someone there, like his presence. Give yourself time to heal, the feeling will go away soon. keep your chin up, and keep writing, its the best heart-broken medication our society can offer.
Comment by ThexDevilxIsxInside: Mar 15, 2008 6:38 pm
aw thats sad =( i feel yu though its ahd to let go of one you feel for.
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