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Better then losing you

Just lately I’ve become so dumb
And my feelings have become so numb
I cant even feel the cold of his aching heart
And I don’t have a clue how to fix it

I’m getting by but its barely even enough to survive
I guess I should just give up and let myself die
But man, I got to try, not just for my sake
His whole entire world is at stake.

He tried to get through to me
But all I gave him was a busy tone
the one you get when somebody else is ringing the telephone
I know I’m stupid but what’s a girl to do
When losing my mind is better then losing you.

by chazie
posted on 09/20/2007

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Comment by NewSensation: Sep 21, 2007 6:44 pm
awwwww *sniff
Comment by footprints: Sep 22, 2007 8:39 am
I really like the last line.. makes you think.
Comment by Bourne: Sep 29, 2007 7:24 am
i got to agree. awesome poem.
Comment by Tequilla: Feb 5, 2008 12:32 pm
really good poem
Comment by funkygiglydoll: Apr 18, 2008 11:00 am
yeah..hard time going there..i can feel it..but u can at least make it longer..
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