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**LOVE SUICIDE**

when do you stop caring,
when do you stop crying,
how much can you possibly take,
before your heart crumbles and breaks,
when you love someone so bad that it hurts inside,
but being with out them just doesnt feel right,
when you feel that gut wrenching feeling,
and every kiss you get you feel like your stealing,
when is enough, enough to say goodbye,
knowing that without them you might as well die,
when youve finally found "the one"
how hard do you try before saying your done,
when you wake up and you imediately grab your phone,
just to hear them say "i love you" and know your not alone,
when you go to bed with thoughts if them in your head,
and without them beside you, you feel empty and dead,
how do you know where the line is to the point of no return
how do you feel the love, when its the "love" that burns,
how do you stop what you didnt intend to start,
how do you hold it together when someones tearing it apart,
how do you trust when youve been hurt so many times,
how do you know when to stop when you've already crossed too many lines,
what makes your heart stop beating,
how do you stop the bleeding,
the hurt the pain,
tears falling line rain,
when? when is time to say goodbye,
to give up. fall apart. die....

by landrysmommy
posted on 12/26/2007

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Comment by romantichomicide: Dec 27, 2007 3:58 am
i have felt this way before, very tragic words
Comment by kassey: Dec 27, 2007 6:39 pm
I can understand in a way, well written with lots of emotion. However, hang on to life it is too precious. If you want to know how I can say this from my heart read my poem "Shattered Peace". I hold on to life and will live it to the fullest while I can. Remember the good times in your life. It is the hardest thing to do when all seems against you. Good Luck.
Comment by kassey: Dec 27, 2007 6:40 pm
I can understand in a way, well written with lots of emotion. However, hang on to life it is too precious. If you want to know how I can say this from my heart read my poem "Shattered Peace". I hold on to life and will live it to the fullest while I can. Remember the good times in your life. It is the hardest thing to do when all seems against you. Good Luck.
Comment by PrayForMe: Jan 7, 2008 8:47 am
This is very deep. I love it...Smiley
Comment by jasonfoolio: Jan 11, 2008 12:03 am
posting 2 comments on my poems just saying good made me feel like u didnt read it cuz i suck so bad its not worth it that you , you bitch
Comment by bow16: Jan 22, 2008 1:50 pm
I really like this poem...It reminds me of my mom...And how it was between my dad and her...This is a really great poem...
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