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As Time Passes

As time passes I grow weaker.
From the minute I met you,
to the moment I left you,
time was nothing to matter.
But as days, weeks, months pass --
I come weaker as you stronger;
time is but the past.
But now I know what it was --
that makes me miss you so.
I loved you,
but didn't tell you --
so I have to let it go.

by Gary
posted on 12/31/1969

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Comment by prhotty147:
damn that z a nice ass poem seriously thatz really good and deep
Comment by RedStone:
Nice poem, talent is a gift unto those of natural thought
Comment by Mari: Apr 7, 2006 6:51 am
good peom Gary, it feel the same way that i did a little
Comment by changeling: Apr 12, 2006 9:16 pm
the seemingly simpler style really adds to the mood and impression
Comment by faithmairee: Apr 15, 2006 6:35 am
a sad but very profound poem very nicely writen, i might add...

faith
Comment by Skylar: Aug 2, 2006 7:05 pm
saddening.
goes to show that people should always express the way they feel.
pretty good, I would say it needs a little work but it kinda of has its own style so I say leave as is instead.
good work.
Comment by Brittney: Aug 3, 2006 1:10 pm
I love it
I feel about it exactly how Skylar puts it
Great poem
<33
Brittney
Comment by Courtney: Aug 6, 2006 5:20 pm
i'm with Brittney and Skylar on this one. i love the poem. great job
Comment by mysticalgoddess: Oct 3, 2006 1:59 pm
the girls are right.love your poem but errors here and there.but dont change it.that's how you felt when you wrote it.
Comment by prncezz: Oct 12, 2006 7:54 am
the mood seems kind of calm, but at the same time, strong, telling so much.
Comment by danielradfreak: Oct 21, 2006 3:57 pm
That's why u should always tell people how u feel bout them. Exellent poem!!
Comment by InMyDreams: Nov 18, 2006 1:31 pm
yep i agree- really good poem too!
Comment by SisterofDarkness: Feb 12, 2007 10:31 am
that is amazing!!!
Comment by tearsofrain: Mar 25, 2007 1:34 pm
i like it. someting very real in your words. amazing flow. good point that i can relate to.
Comment by Styrmwolf: Mar 25, 2007 3:15 pm
Hmm, it's a very emotive poem, but not altogether original.
Also the line: "come weaker as you stronger" seems off and could be worded a bit better.
Comment by nickson104: Mar 28, 2007 1:03 pm
thats a really good poem i like it a lot
Comment by MrNobody: Mar 28, 2007 9:31 pm
very good, i can totally relate to it too.
Comment by oldman: Mar 29, 2007 9:56 pm
Nice work. both on paper and with self.
Comment by missingmom: Apr 2, 2007 10:00 am
Very good! I knew someone like that, I still love them too, and they still don't know it.
Comment by MechanicalAnimal: Apr 7, 2007 6:22 pm
Sweet like chocolate... why do I say these things? It was good. Is good. Since it's still there. I should really stop using people's comment boxes to yap on. I'll go now.
Comment by ThatDarkGirl: Apr 13, 2007 10:21 am
You own the web but you only submitted THREE poems?!
Comment by PoemWritingGuy: Apr 22, 2007 10:59 pm
I prefer quality rather than quantity... AND THIS IS AN AWESOME POEM!! I love it Smiley
Comment by BrokenLittleGirl: Apr 24, 2007 8:38 pm
this is a great poem and i truly love it.i can kinda relate to it.amazing.
Comment by queenphoenix: Apr 26, 2007 5:29 am
Nah, everyone I fell in love with I told. That don't work out so great either =_=

Actually, for me, it happens the same. Weird. Different action, same result.

I feel so disillusioned...
Comment by NeotericDawn: Jul 11, 2007 8:24 am
Wow.
Nice poem.
Comment by drdreya32: Jul 11, 2007 8:29 am
i like it cool poem
Comment by MsKeys1707: Jul 17, 2007 9:51 pm
this is a really good poem but it is sad
Very well written
Comment by friendZdogZ: Aug 13, 2007 4:48 am
wonderful
Comment by laceylue08: Nov 20, 2007 10:45 am
loveit
Comment by laceylue08: Nov 20, 2007 10:45 am
love it
Comment by laceylue08: Nov 20, 2007 10:45 am
love it
Comment by laceylue08: Nov 20, 2007 10:45 am
love it
Comment by laceylue08: Nov 20, 2007 10:45 am
love it
Comment by laceylue08: Nov 20, 2007 10:46 am
love it
Comment by laceylue08: Nov 20, 2007 10:46 am
love it
Comment by laceylue08: Nov 20, 2007 10:46 am
love it
Comment by laceylue08: Nov 20, 2007 10:46 am
lone it
Comment by xxKittenxx: Nov 28, 2007 6:04 am
awww wow hunny thts so cute, it also prooves a really good point if you dont tel someone how you feel before you lose them its hard to get the strength to speak to them again so you hae to let them go, awsomly deep stuff man!
Comment by HeartlessAngel: Nov 28, 2007 10:25 am
great poem.
Comment by laceylue08: Dec 11, 2007 11:13 am
love it!
Comment by FlawsAndAll: Dec 31, 2007 10:50 pm
I like this. Sweet and simple. Smiley
Comment by missingmom: Jan 8, 2008 2:07 pm
Not much worse than the regret of an "I love you" left unspoken. I love this poem! Smiley
Comment by tinkie: Jan 17, 2008 11:44 pm
short and sweet. sad but sweet.
Comment by OverTheRainbow: Feb 19, 2008 3:16 pm
Smiley
Comment by gaara: Feb 20, 2008 1:21 pm
LOVE IT MAN =P
Comment by sweetnrosie: Feb 26, 2008 7:36 am
this is really deep. i absolutely love it! Smiley
Comment by FavoriteTheMute: Sep 5, 2008 7:06 am
Nice.
Comment by adilene: Apr 22, 2008 4:57 pm
i love it. i think i shound tell the person i love him
Comment by Hawtbaby: Oct 7, 2008 5:57 pm
that really toucched me.... very deeply! thanks do much =)
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