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An Angel Fall

The make-up
running down her face
her eyes so sad
Yet he cant see
And she cant care
Love is gone
its just not there
The winds blowing hard
moving her hair thro the air
Standing on her building
just looking down
holding on tight
trying not to make a
sound...Her red dress
sweeping across the
ground She lets go
her tears end
some said
they saw an angel fall
The night she let go
of it all

by twiztidAngel
posted on 09/06/2009

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Comments: 21
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Comment by Alexanne: Sep 7, 2009 5:04 am
aww... its nice and sad.
i kinda pictured myself jumping off a building..
Comment by true: Sep 7, 2009 12:02 am
great.... love it...
Comment by jpl023: Sep 8, 2009 1:24 am
Wow, wonderful poem.
Comment by DarkestAngle: Sep 7, 2009 9:49 pm
wow,this is so sad
But it's so good
Comment by ZackeryDaley: Sep 7, 2009 7:59 pm
short but bitter
Comment by Ashvygna: Sep 10, 2009 10:27 am
beautiful poem..i can already picture th scene
Comment by TiffantAnnLoganAdams: Nov 18, 2009 12:40 pm
wow
Comment by flippinthrulife17: Sep 14, 2009 5:10 am
*shivers* gaaah this gave me severe chills. I could picture everything happening. It's so heartbreaking *tears up* wow...jeez...
That was amazing
SO awfully sad :[
Comment by lalala: Sep 6, 2009 3:52 pm
lol.. i like it its nice sad.. very nice Smiley
Comment by Shieravinne: Sep 12, 2009 7:51 am
really honest...
Comment by brokenwingangel: Sep 8, 2009 9:55 am
i like it.. i can make a picture in my head of whats happening.
Comment by XxKatieKhaosxX: Sep 8, 2009 1:58 pm
thats so sad.. but its a really nice poem
Comment by sneha: Sep 9, 2009 8:27 am
why this happens to us
but its a wonderful way to express yourself.
keep it up.
Comment by Poetryinmotion: Sep 9, 2009 3:46 pm
Simple but meaningful. Nice.
Comment by mizzjayluv: Sep 9, 2009 5:17 pm
good poem
Comment by XxInsanebeautixX: Sep 10, 2009 9:29 pm
This is a great poem. I can remember some days when I felt like jumping off a building
Comment by DanceInside: Sep 10, 2009 10:10 pm
Bittersweet, like most love.
Comment by sion: Sep 13, 2009 3:39 am
I love it...really got to me
Comment by CraigforAmanda: Sep 16, 2009 6:02 pm
Great poem, very expressive.
Comment by GreshamGirl09: Sep 16, 2009 9:08 am
i like it too...
Comment by Callousedheart3: Oct 16, 2009 6:02 pm
Wow... this poem... is so... amazing. Really good, I love it.
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