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Alone In The Rain

I wanna grab your hand.
Embrace you like never let go.
But its all over.
We're not for each other anymore.

There's a lot more to say.
But words won't come out.
I watch you walk away.
Tears fell from my eyes.
I was left in the rain.
See you fade away.

The hurt is killing me.
All I can do is to set you free.
Feelin' all the pain.
Hearin' nothing but rain.
Shivered by the last thoughts of you.
Shattered by the last words from you.

Alone in the rain.
Wish it drown away all the pain.






by zato
posted on 02/08/2009

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Comment by forgottenfairy: Feb 8, 2009 12:50 pm
awww i love it Smiley well done im voting this up!
Comment by xHurricane: Feb 8, 2009 10:47 pm
Very great write, and i'm sure everyone can relate. I think you wrote it with passion, "shattered by the last words from you" very sad, and it's true, those last words can break us because we always have them in mind, and we go over them over and over. I like this poem. Unfortunately, I can relate. I like that last wish at the end, if only.

Write on!

xHurricane
Comment by grunty: Feb 9, 2009 11:28 am
Good poem
Much feeling
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