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Alone in Silent Suffering

Silently seething, silently screaming. I hold out my hand and silenty hope. Your bloodied fingers reach out to mine. Too late we silently fall out of time. Before the tears and before the lies, I silently hope we will last until tomorrow night. As the light silently fades and our love withers and decays, tears flow as the night grows. I am no longer your silent day-maker, or your silent dream-braker. I am now the echo less scream of a now black, broken heart.

Silently seething, silently screaming. My blood stains your fingers, as your lips stained my cheek. Your tears are black like my silent and unmoving heart. Silently I pull away and silently we fall away. Cracked down the middle like a broken piece of glass, that cuts away at my numbed flesh. You silently scream as the knife of betray cuts away. Your blood pours and tears spatter, but your cold, dead eyes never blink. The words are the knife and in it a confession of my one obsession. As I try to hold you and cling to you, to stop your bleeding and suffering, You silently pull away and leave me to rot and decay, alone in silent suffering.
-Silently lost, silently broken.

by MrNobody
posted on 05/09/2007

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Comment by Darryn732: May 10, 2007 12:39 am
nice
Comment by kayla: May 10, 2007 1:11 am
very good!
Comment by BlackRoseMaiden: May 10, 2007 6:43 am
good poem it has lots of emotion in it
Comment by KCFangel: May 10, 2007 9:28 am
wow, this is great, so powerful, and wow...i love it...! great job! </3 angel
Comment by broken3heart3: May 10, 2007 9:54 pm
wow thats so emotional... id liek to say that id be there to help but i dont know if youd take my help or tell me about your painful wounds... luv3 the poem it really got to my heart and im sry to say that my tears are dry so i may never cry for a beautiful poem like this one <3333
Comment by TheEmoFreak: May 18, 2007 5:35 pm
so much emotion! just amazing! idk wat else to say
Comment by Freewriter91: Jul 14, 2007 9:01 pm
Wow i'm speechless that has so much emotion in it
Comment by scarredemotions17: Nov 3, 2007 9:57 pm
sad and depressing but it was well written and i like it.
Comment by footprints: Nov 16, 2007 7:52 pm
This is really well written - despite being a difficult topic, it was a joy to read. Looking forward to reading more of your work.
Comment by MysticFog: Jul 10, 2008 9:28 am
Wow this is really good! I love it and i agree with all the comments above!!
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