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Against The Sun

Nothing left to do
But run, run, run.
Against the sun,
Just run, run, run.

From the house
And below the noose.
So long as the moon
Sits in the sky
My breath will never die.
Born to run, run, run,
Against the sun.

Run, run, run.
Escape all the worries,
Leave all the boddies.
Run, run, run,
As far as my feet will go
While the sweat will flow.
Run, run, run,
From the same melancholy,
Past the same tiredness,
And run, run, run
Against the sun.

by Bourne
posted on 03/21/2008

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Comment by danielle: Mar 21, 2008 10:06 pm
nice
Comment by tobeloved: Mar 22, 2008 7:29 am
good job! Smiley keep writing.
Comment by thestewardofgondor: Mar 22, 2008 10:38 am
yeah it is very good
seems bit easy but i like it a lot with a deeper meaning maybe
Comment by unknown: Mar 25, 2008 11:24 am
great poem.
Comment by NeVeRmOrE: Mar 26, 2008 12:16 pm
I agree,
Great poem
Comment by shyhallow: Mar 28, 2008 2:27 pm
I run to escape too, sometimes. Although, it's probably not smart to run away from problems and worries - they always seem to come back to haunt us later.

It is a very well written poem. I'd have to say my favorite stanza is the second one. Smiley
Comment by shyhallow: Mar 28, 2008 2:27 pm
I run to escape too, sometimes. Although, it's probably not smart to run away from problems and worries - they always seem to come back to haunt us later.

It is a very well written poem. I'd have to say my favorite stanza is the second one. Smiley
Comment by DeVdoll343: Apr 9, 2008 6:59 pm
I feeelll this Sadi.
It's so great. This is your nature poem--- yeah? Ours are in two different lights, but yours is wonderful. I like running, it makes me feel free.
Comment by loveseekerhatefinder: May 19, 2008 7:07 pm
I like this one, the rythme is cool..keep creating the masterpieces!
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