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A presence in the world.."sucide"

Sucide; Todays tonic for frustration
a gaint back door from reality
Slips in unconciously as just a mere thought
It resides there
in our mind gathering opportunities to enthrone itself
just like a
brutal politician seeking
for a chance to be president.

He has no blood on his hands
He is just a frontman and ally
Whose lips promises words of peace,gently
leading you seductively into the embrace of death
his master and friend.

His sisters,selfishness and over rated grief
dance seductively in your mind
paving the way for him to come in
like wanton princesses during lovemaking.

As the blade drops
As the rope cuts
As the last pill is swallowed
he leaves,lurking in dark coners
looking for another potential victim
He gets his thrills from
the sorrow of the deceased
He laughs at his victims for ever being stupid.
His target.. mainly is the young
who wouldnt think twice about their actions
he likes them so much!"They are so gullibly!" he sings

Who will save us from this
presence?
Who will liberate us from this evil that has become a hobby to mankind?

The master of all presences calls...
He wonders why humanity yeilds to the
friend of his servant "DEATH"
He comes out with no reason at all...

We have no excuse
We have no point
We have no essence for our actions
Lets shame this foe!
Rethink mankind...
RETHINK!!!!

by Novembre
posted on 07/19/2007

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Comment by emodeath: Jul 19, 2007 5:19 pm
great poem. i liked the use of saying that suicide is like a human and has human characteristics i can't remember what thats called but well done i love it
Comment by Jenifer5: Jul 19, 2007 6:29 pm
wow that was really great...gives it a new perspective. Smiley
Comment by haydenwyker: Jul 19, 2007 6:49 pm
great one. very true and very sad. a vote from me indeed!
Comment by PoemWritingGuy: Jul 20, 2007 6:40 am
I think you mean personification emodeath. Smiley Very good poem Novembre. Open smile
Comment by TheEmoFreak: Jul 20, 2007 2:03 pm
wow. great poem. very deep!
Comment by McRluvr: Jul 20, 2007 3:05 pm
ya very great poem i like how you compared it to a politician it was really clever thinking .. great job!
Comment by pmaravelias: Jul 20, 2007 7:21 pm
Great personification of suicide!
Comment by quies: Jul 20, 2007 7:31 pm
Wonderful personification and you describe every event as if it's vivid painting. Very nice.
Comment by friendZdogZ: Jul 20, 2007 9:58 pm
i like the way u write, i can understand and relate to it, u're very good
Comment by deathmonkey: Jul 22, 2007 8:51 am
i like it.. well thought out
Comment by xwhisperingxanglex: Jul 22, 2007 7:35 pm
i love this poem! omg
so nice!
Comment by DarkAngel: Jul 23, 2007 4:42 am
this is so true....i could feel the emotion comming from this poem, it makes you think "why give in when things arent going your way.....dont let him take over"

great poem keep it up
Comment by Findingyou: Jul 23, 2007 6:07 am
i love this poem..it was amazing..it was so ..good..great poem
Comment by KCFangel: Jul 23, 2007 10:25 am
i like this poem, it is very different then most things i read, it's a nice change, i love the different comparisons, and it was very well written...a couple spell checks, but that's just me playing english teacher...sry get it from my parents...lol...but otherwise...great poem!!!! keep up the great work!......</3 angel
Comment by haydenwyker: Jul 23, 2007 6:20 pm
shit. thats fully sick. way better than mine. pure coolness!

~Hayden..
Comment by haydenwyker: Jul 23, 2007 6:25 pm
shit. thats fully sick. way better than mine. pure coolness!

~Hayden..
Comment by bloodypaintedart: Apr 14, 2008 3:50 pm
great writter you are this was twisted!
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