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A lover’s goodbye…

**Her Last Goodbye**

Why don't you see me standing here?
Can’t you see that I’ve fallen for you?
She doesn’t treat you right
don’t you know I would jump the moon for you?
I have been your friend for years
you come to me when she cheats on you
Then you come back later holding her hand.
She made you cry last week again,
and yet you keep going back for more.
I know im your best friend and always will be
Please give me a chance, I’ll love you better!
There you are again at my door with a broken heart.
As I always do, I mend it...
You have no idea how I feel for you...
Please can’t you see the way I look at you???
A life without love is worthless
I can’t stand to see you with her again,
you have no clue what is going on with me.
I don't want you to leave me alone again tonight;
I know I will never see you again after tonight...
You left me again, almost smiling as you walked away,
I pick up my knife preparing for the relief
Only moments later does the pain finally cease
Life slipping from my arms sweetly and quietly.
Im leaving you with her knowing you never loved me
always dreaming you would change your mind,
knowing you never would, I finally say goodbye....

**His Last Goodbye**

I see you standing there looking at me,
It hurts me knowing I can never have you.
I know you love me and I love you,
But im not good enough to be with you.
You deserve someone better than me
Who loves you as much as me but isn’t broken inside,
I come to you when she breaks up with me again,
I cry again in your arms because my heart is breaking
I want to love you like you deserve bit I know I cant
I don’t cry because I love HER, I cry because I love YOU
My tears are yours forever but you will never know it.
She cheats on me again and I go to your arms once more
I know this will be the last time I see you again,
I can’t keep doing this to you because the pain in your eyes is killing me
I came over to tell you I loved you and goodbye, but I can’t…
You seem unhappy tonight but you try to smile for me anyways
As I softly smile back as I walk away when I turn around im crying
I get home, pick up the gun, and stare at it.
Crying, I pull the trigger and shoot myself.
With my life draining slowly from my body quietly
I’m holding one of your bracelets to my lips and I finally slip away forever…

by fallenangel6636
posted on 04/08/2008

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Comment by hiddeninblood: Apr 8, 2008 8:13 am
this is so sad...but very well written poem...it's really good....
Comment by meltedsnowman: Apr 8, 2008 9:17 am
hmmm...that was....ummm...awsome? it was really deep and sad and moving and touching..should i go on?
Comment by EmoBabyGurL: Apr 8, 2008 1:59 pm
I love it!!! It reminds me of how I feel. I absoluetely love it!!!!
Comment by Blazen: Apr 8, 2008 7:22 pm
This is amazing i loved all of it, it was so touchin and gripping just awesome x
Comment by GothicGoddess: Apr 8, 2008 7:41 pm
Brilliant
Comment by poemsarebliss: Apr 9, 2008 5:29 am
absolutely lovely!!..very very goood..
Comment by angelofthereaper: Apr 9, 2008 1:51 pm
omg i can relate.... i am in love with my best friend and he doesnt know Sad face
Comment by Snoman: Apr 9, 2008 5:43 pm
im gonna say something and i'll never say it again... meltedsnowman is crazy! putting a "w" in snoman!!!
oh well that's not what i was gonna say once... i was gonna say that i absolutely loved this poem and it frustrates me to the point i'll admit to having written a similar poem but not posting it cause i found it incomplete... and now u beat me to the point and i've got no will to post it, because i actually concerned urs is better than mine... there i beat around the bush for that long but there i said it! and here it is again! Your's is better than Mine... errr that's frustrating but sooo sweet dude, i love this poem, i love this idea, and there i said it. Sticking tongue out

"A Life without Love
Has no true meaning
As eyes without sight
Hold no truth in seeing"
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