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A Heavy Load

Sometimes I wonder how many tears
it'll take to get through the years,
because I carry such a heavy load,
my heart, that's what I'm told.

by sweetxdreamsXOXO
posted on 03/16/2008

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Comment by nickson104: Mar 16, 2008 9:14 am
wow i love it, having a good heart is such a heavy burden to carry, do not leave it behind to make the journey easier
Comment by Darryn732: Mar 16, 2008 11:54 am
I love it good job
Comment by MechanicalAnimal: Mar 16, 2008 11:57 am
Cool.
Comment by MechanicalAnimal: Mar 16, 2008 11:57 am
Cool.
Comment by karinapicaboo: Mar 16, 2008 12:46 pm
thats cute and simple i like it :]
Comment by xxilovetohatetoloveyouxx: Mar 16, 2008 2:24 pm
thats simple
Comment by foreverendeavor1790: Mar 25, 2008 11:26 am
i agree very simple but yet very good!!
Comment by Itami: Apr 21, 2008 10:15 pm
Very powerful poem in just a few words. Great job!
Comment by babyboogt82886: May 14, 2008 5:44 am
Wow really short but very sweet! Smiley
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