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*Slits*

I知 craving the feeling of the cold metal upon my wrists,
My head wants to explode my heart turns & twists.
I used to be a cutter I gave up a long time ago,
But the pain deep inside is really starting to show.

I知 afraid that people will ask me exactly what is wrong,
I知 tired of being sad, all I want is to be strong.
But people don稚 understand just why I知 always down,
Why instead of a smile I always wear a frown.

by babyboogt82886
posted on 05/12/2008

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Comment by TaintedThorn: May 12, 2008 7:22 am
really great poem...but you don't need to go back to it...resist...oh yeah this is hiddeninblood by the way...stay strong im here for you....
Comment by scarsofsecrets: May 12, 2008 8:43 am
great poem. i agree with TaintedThorn u dont have to go back to it. u can always talk to me. dont give up.
Comment by Breathexxforxxme: May 12, 2008 9:28 am
yeah same here! see you have people(friends) and/or people who wanna be your friends and really look forward to being there for you i to wanna be here for you.. you need not to go back to cutting the difference between your knife and your true friends are that your true friends will never hurt you i will never hurt you...~smiles~
Comment by MyMisery: May 12, 2008 10:10 am
yea i feel the same but if u cut people think really bad of u so u have to become someone your not and fake how u feel im sorry im so here 4 u
Comment by Darryn732: May 12, 2008 10:19 am
I love it Good Poem
Comment by babylove: May 12, 2008 10:37 am
this is an amazing poem... it reminds me of myself.. i used to cut.... and people made fun of me and then i would cut some more.... and then someone told me they loved me and that was enough to make me quit...
Comment by loveme77: May 12, 2008 2:33 pm
This is so amazing. Good poem. Vote up.
I don't know it kind of seems unfinished to me... But maybe I'm just crazy.

I hope you get through this okay.
Comment by loveforeverlivelonger: May 12, 2008 3:38 pm
good poem hun. but don't do it
it's an adiction

I have three lines on my wrist right now.
Every time i look at them I feel like i regret them just don't do it i am here for you
Comment by unknowntruth1: May 12, 2008 4:31 pm
great poem
i know exactly how you feel and i feel the same way at this time in my life. just try to be strong and dont go back to it. no matter how hard it is. and if you ever need to talk im always here
Comment by WakeFan325: May 12, 2008 4:37 pm
great poem, great rhymes. cant personally say that ive been through that, but i know its not worth it.
Comment by rosesANDletters: May 12, 2008 5:41 pm
hey please don't go back to it
! talk to someone... if you need someone to talk to i'm here
Comment by sajinn: May 12, 2008 5:53 pm
i feel the same way sometimes.....
Comment by moonlightdancer: May 13, 2008 7:08 am
i know ur pain.i never cut mysefl till like 2 weeks ago.i was going through some stuff and couldnt handle it and didnt know what else 2 do and now i have 7 long lines on my arm....dont cut urself,talk 2 me instead...
Comment by lindseymarie: May 13, 2008 10:41 am
great poem...i really understand how u feel...i used to be a cutter too, and i still write about it.
Comment by NeVeRmOrE: May 13, 2008 6:45 pm
great poem,and i understand how you feel,completely
Comment by LoOnEyBeAr: May 14, 2008 10:14 am
This is a very strongly worded poem...
Comment by KookiesLilSweetheart: May 14, 2008 1:06 pm
Wow!! good poem! i know how you feel if you need someone to talk to i am here. if you need a friend i could be that friend!! Good Luck and God Bless!! Smiley
Comment by ThatUnforgetableCharm: May 14, 2008 2:34 pm
I知 tired of being sad, all I want is to be strong

My favorite line in any poem..
Comment by AngelicallyBroken: May 14, 2008 4:27 pm
very good...like we've all been saying never go back to that,don't hurt yourself and bring yourself more pain than you are already in.ima lways here for ya!
Comment by tobeloved: May 14, 2008 5:26 pm
really good poem, but stay strong don't resort to your old ways.
Comment by thefadingscene: May 14, 2008 6:33 pm
oh my sweet jesus.
this is annoying.
Comment by xxilovetohatetoloveyouxx: May 15, 2008 1:05 pm
hey just cause ur life is bad doesnt mean you should hurt urself. remember somebody always has it worse.
Comment by lilphat15: May 16, 2008 7:17 am
THIS POEM IS REALLY GOOK KEEP DOING A GOOD JOB!!!
Comment by drkromance: May 18, 2008 12:14 pm
Amazing poem but it's very sad. I'm sorry if this poem was inspiried by a broken heart. Hang in there.
Comment by deadlyinluv24: May 19, 2008 10:45 am
great poem! it seems a lot of us feel that way inside..... like the scars of the past are still here i've been asked questions bout my legs........and y my eyes r always bruised....but i hope u'll b ok.......:> if u need to talk im here or send me ur aim name.
Comment by lilphat15: May 20, 2008 6:45 am
i hope that you recover if you need n e 1 2 talk 2 im here my # is 813-447-5555 call n e tym.....
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