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"Unwritten"

what's unwriten has already been said
and i'm lost in the river's raving tide
swept off in the currents of my head
Causing the pain I feel to become ever so clear
Flooding my body causing me to feel like Im drowning
And then closing in on my every substantial fear
No one understands the reasons I have for my frowning
I want to run, but don't know where,
I feel like there's an invisible rope,
Tying me to this despair,
Ripping me from all the hope,
The hope of a future secure
Of a brighter tomorrow,
But there's no cure,
For this endless sorrow
save me from this emptiness i feel inside
Remove the mask that I'm always hiding behind
Break these chains and set me free
I am waiting for you
to come rescue me


by: hiddeninblood, timewornsoul, GirlYouOnceKnew, childOFtheNIGHT


by kaylasheray
posted on 08/02/2008

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Comment by hiddeninblood: Aug 3, 2008 12:57 am
what's unwriten has already been said
and i'm lost in the river's raving tide
swept off in the currents of my head

here you go i tried my best..Smiley
Comment by timewornsoul: Aug 3, 2008 1:35 am
Causing the pain I feel to become ever so clear.
Flooding my body causing me to feel like Im drowning.
And then closing in on my every substantial fear.
No one understands the reasons I have for my frowning.

Well thats what I got for it...I was continuing off of hiddeninbloods lines..Smiley
Comment by GirlYouOnceKnew: Aug 3, 2008 10:50 am
I want to run, but don't know where,
I feel like there's an invisible rope,
Tying me to this despair,
Ripping me from all the hope,

The hope of a future secure
Of a brighter tomorrow,
But there's no cure,
For this endless sorrow

~well it's not that good but thats all i got...~

Comment by childOFtheNIGHT: Aug 3, 2008 5:13 pm
save me from this emptiness i feel inside....

Remove the mask that I'm always hiding behind

Break these chains and set me free
I am waiting for you
Unleash the demon in me


It's not much but here you go =)
Comment by kaylasheray: Aug 4, 2008 12:55 am
thank you everyone.. i will for sure add it up Open smile
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